
12-27-2005, 08:45 AM
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Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Louisville, KY
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This is all from a personal standpoint, I'm not LAT but I believe I can judge levels fairly well.
First level:
Waterfall: Overall, pretty nice. I don't like the dark water around bottom though, makes it look very unnatural.
Cliffs: I think the cliffs are okay. However, when you go from a diagonal tile to a straight one on the top layer, it isn't flowing. Not sure if that can be fixed with pics1.
Grass: I like the grass detail but I don't like when you used the dark outlined grass and the dark green outlined grass right in the middle of the same line/section. For example, the top left corner after the small patch of grass where the big patch meets...it looks okay I just don't like it.
Okay and the house thing? Uhhhhh....definitely do not like that. The cliff on the water stopping abruptly on the water also looks funny. When all else fails, make a graphic.
Aside from some tile errors (one very noticable on the cliff), it's good.
Second level: pretty much the same comments, but I noticed that I think the perspective on the mud sand is wrong. The shading around the top doesn't look right. There's also a tile error in the bottom right pond. The grass could use a bit more detail.
From these two levels, good job with pics1. It's hard to work with. Keep it up! |
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