Beach:
The beach tile is ok but it could do with some extra addons such as shells and other items.
Grass:
The pallet of the grass compared to that of the beach tile is nice. But seriously get rid of the patch of grass (the darker colour) it clashes like hell.
Also get rid of the bush.. either make a diffrent one or leave it out of the picture.. it hurts the eye
Sand:
The patern is reasonable but you should make it adjust to the colour of the grass cause it clashes.
Water:
Did you make it yourself? Anyhow try to lighten it cause it clashes with the rest of the stuff and it looks rather horrible as a graphic on its own especialy in that colour. (Sorry personal opinion)
The tree:
The leafs should be redone (like kondias suggested) but the base is ok..
The House:
I personaly dislike it and it has no dimensions. Try to go for a better roof design. The /-\ (cut off piramide) shape your using doesn't work very well try to go for /\ (triangle) instead and it would look better. You might even want to take a look at this.
http://www.graalonline.com/community...0.65259300.png
Its a better angle for a building I guess.
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Originally Posted by protagonist
The trees look like broccoli.
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More like fake green clipon nails. Stuck to a tree top
