I liked the third shield revision better than the second. The third shield looks like a giant spider, while the second... I still need to figure out.
The hood looks alright, but you might wanna set the hole for it a tad bit lower. There's a lot of forehead showing on your character, when there should be very little. The hat's got a great shape, I just think you should get the shades matching.
And just to reiterate... try to double-edge the sword so that it doesn't look like a rip-off of TG if you're gonna go with gray.