[Scott]

Well, I'll tell you what I love first. The torso, wings, and the extended tails. Neck seems rather choppy, smoothen it out perhaps? Eye looks completely out of place, perhaps just try white eye? The tail is too bold and the shapes are ugly looking. Smoothen them out just by taking a white pencil tool and going over the edges in a nice curve. Nice to see somone here who prefers this style of drawing finally. Mind showing the reference picture?