01-26-2005, 10:40 PM
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Nil Recurring
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Join Date: Jun 2002
Posts: 1,911
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Looks great, just a few nitpicks:
1) On the stone stair tiles where it meets the top of the cliff, it looks like the grass is just abruptly cut off.
2) Why is there light shining out from the cave? Unless it has a bunch of torches near the entrance, light should be shining into it.
3) The door to the house seems to have the adaptation of bioluminescence as well. The light should only be shining from the doorway when it is open? |
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