Another level :O
 

Hullo folks...I made another level.

Was wondering what you think?!

Much better than the last one. Technically speaking it's nice, but I have a few problems with the style.

-Water, your water is very "crab" like. Try making the water flow more smoothly or something. I don't like the water on the top left of the level, it makes the level look wrong.

-Deep sand, try making it flow better. It looks like little lumps randomly sticking around and it's not so nice. Also doesn't really make logical sense heh.

Love the detail on top of the cliff on the left. I like the technical aspect of the level, specially around the waterfall.

Keep going.

Above and to the right of the cave, one of the grass corner tiles is the wrong one. Also the waterfall looks iffy but those tiles are bad anyways in my opinion, so not really much you can do.

Otherwise very nice Xelt.

Absolutely brilliant. Lovin' the layout!! Keep it up!

That looks like a great level :)!

Really nice.


hi xelt

Its really pretty. [:
The only thing is that ending part on top of the left cliff (near the waterfall) kind of confuses me.
Other than that, its prettyyyy, Xelt!

Besides the fact the right of the waterfall looks as if it's sitting on top of the cliffs, it looks good. I like it a lot. ^^

I suggest adding more grass detail, specifically more tiles such as fences, rocks, etc.
I suggest adding more sand detail to a lesser extent than the grass detail.
I dislike your unorthodox use of the dark sand.
I suggest more experimenting with the waterfall to make it fit more nicely.
I suggest a different approach to edging out the medium (between shallow and deep) water beneath the waterfall.

Good use of layering and cliffing.