er32 (My first Zone gun)
 

i was bored so i started on a outline and ended up coloring it too, i thought it lookt like a Zone Rifle :D!

here it is: http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/6...coner32sc7.png

too small/big?
comments please! :)

Not my type. Srry

:\ if you only gona say that, dont post.
give me a comment on what u think of the gun/ something needs to be edited, etc.
"not my type. srry" :cry:.

What's with the lines on the body of it? They look scrapes/scratches. Was that meant to be part of the gun's detail?

1)what you mean lines on the body? how the player is holding it?

2)yeah i think so..
is that bad :frown:?

I think it looks like a bad version of the FAMAS.

maybe i should change the handle to the other way? -_-

if it is a rifle should it not have a front grip? something..who holds a rifle one handed? ykno? not trying to burn u.

alrgt I'll add that

okey i changed the handle direction and added something to hold on.
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/6...oner322gr5.png
hows that?

It seems pretty small and doesn't seem to blend with a lot of the colors you would see in game. Can you try other views and showing it on a player?

okey heres the player hold;
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/7...yerholdhu1.png
and the multi views (with i would be happy if i could have some help on down/up view, i'm not so good on that);
http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/445...poner32lk3.gif

You could always try to make it get longer and wider in the back? That might help.

hmm..
i dont see how you are thinking i would make it wider..

You can make it wider by having it get larger and smaller. That might add contrast.