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Crono 11-13-2007 05:52 PM

Rate my level.
 
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Originally made for Aimee (was her birthday, she wanted a hangout level for UN...), I decided I'd just put my time into it and try to make something good to post here (like I do every year).

Halfway through I kind of forgot it was supposed to be a hangout level, explaining the stump and 2 chairs. Some of you might remember I made a waterfall level last year kind of like this...I wasn't happy with it. But this one seems fine.

Rate, crit, etc.

:)

edit- Rufus didn't like the original, so I edited it based on what he thought was wrong.

Laek2007 11-13-2007 06:15 PM

Like it.. the best part of it is that it looks realistic in the right amounts!

Pimmeh 11-13-2007 06:55 PM

The waterfall on the top cliff that falls down alone looks fine, most likely because the cliffs next to it bend down, and not up like the other one, but the other one looks strange.
Same with the other 2 (the lower ones), I like the smaller and the single waterfall, but the other one looks strange.
Nevertheless, nice work

WanDaMan 11-13-2007 07:23 PM

Amazing! Lovely job!! 9/10

Crono 11-14-2007 02:09 AM

There, added an edit to the original post. :pluffy:

Darlene159 11-14-2007 02:37 AM

I like the second one.
Very nice.

Codein 11-14-2007 11:56 AM

It's beautiful :)

Pimmeh 11-14-2007 01:23 PM

I like the second one better :)
But not the waterfalls!

Nabru 11-14-2007 06:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by WanDaMan (Post 1358233)
Amazing! Lovely job!! 9/10

I agree with !WaN

Tigairius 11-14-2007 08:24 PM

I see some errors that could easily be fixed, but overall, good job.

Crono 11-14-2007 09:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tigairius (Post 1358374)
I see some errors that could easily be fixed, but overall, good job.

Point them out please.

Tom 11-14-2007 10:37 PM

Wow, that a godly level dude :D Love it

Knightmare1 11-14-2007 10:53 PM

ok crono, 9.5/10. and dude, DRAW A PLUFFY MATRIX OR PLUFFY ZONEIAN!!!

theHAWKER 11-15-2007 03:13 AM

0/10, make a creative level, not a tree/cliff/water level... zzZZ

MrAnonymous_P2P 11-15-2007 03:17 AM

Way to busy on the ground, in all honesty I agree with thehawker a little that it is kinda boring, but in general there are way to many tiles on the ground, looks like you just randomly put them everywhere.


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