Anubis' Timebomb
 

Someone else made a timebomb and I thought I'd give it a try.
Note: The colours on the school computers are messed up so it might seem a little off (maybe)
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/9...brationlx7.png

Looks very much better then the Bomb of Vampireslayer

I don't really like the colors. If they were darker Id be all for it though :)

uh...x_X

you guys can make out what that is?....maybe my computers just ****ed up...it looks to me like a bunch of red and yellow splattered around...?

Its supposed to be like a bomb. It shrinks in on itself. It has holy berries as the fuse. When it gets closer it explodes? You have to look at it for a minute.

same

maybe you could make a remote controll bomb of it,
if the one that placed the bomb press s (or d)
then it is activated and exploses.

Name stop laughtin of vampireslayer , you don't know how to use paint haha rofl..

It looks like a dinnamite

its not shrinking on itself tho. im just saying it doesn't even have a basic outline, that i can make out x_x

Yea, anubis you gotta outline it in some sort of dark color and also for the features so we can see it. Right now it looks like a blur.
Also, I have a gooooooood idea to improve this:

1. get rid of the wires that explodes when it reaches the bomb.
2. make the upper and lower parts (the red and green thing) collapse on itself. That way it can be Ganid so it implodes on itself.

how about this one?

1) That is just... no...
2) DOESNT EVEN FOLLOW MY GUIDELINES >_<