Is this a drastic improvement in levels
 

is this a improvement or does this level suck

it isnt completed yet but it will be soon

It sucks.

???? whats wrong with it????

You're so mean, you could let him down easy by saying 'it needs more work' or something. :)

thaat would have been much nicer

The houses look just plain dumb. And the grass needs more than flowers and little leaves. You need dirt spots, and bushes, etc.

oh ok well thanks alot ssmuts for the suggestions

He said "is this a improvement or does this level suck", so there were two choices, and I chose the 2nd one. :)

All of those and those pathway tiles are so overused by everyone...the day you see me use those tiles for a pathway, please kill me.

lol i am going to fix that and it was on the top of my list even before you sadi that

I would kill to get rid of that house. :)
Practice more with tiles and improve it.

Yeah no offense but that's a pretty poor job of tiling...

I'm sorry to say, but the level is not pleasing to the eye. Especially the house in the top right. As said by someone before, search far and wide in the pics1.png for tiles that would look nice in a certain situation.

That level completely sucks ass it hurts to look at it dont post anymore screenshots

LOL, that actually has improved.
If you need me to help you with some of the tiling, I can do it.

"Mmkay": sugges the bottom middle part of the water stairs as the seat for your swings. Regardless that those are probably just the ones from Valkorlia or something, or an old screenshot....^_^

this looks much better with the light effects but is this any better?
The Ancient Prophecies Screen Shot

Tripod doesn't allow themselves to be used soley for hosting files that are not htm, html, etc.

It's a little better.
Now get back on AIM so I can send j00 that file!

You can see it? I can't :(

Yeah. Go to http://igs0.tripod.com/ and add screenshot.png to the end of it.

Okay, thanks :)


Foxstar, that level is better than the other. It could be improved upon though. Add a land feature such as a cliff or lake. The pathway tiles are meant to be used indoors and should be used indoors. The path should have ended before it hit the dirt patch with the chairs and things in them. That house on the upper-right I do not like at all. One more thing...those small dirt patches are plain and not creative :-\

Maybe you should try to make the house a bit more like the one in this screenshot:

Or something like this:
http://server2042.virtualave.net/pur...chu/house2.png
(There are other things on that level, but they won't show up with ALT+1)

I hate to see those red tiles on every goddamn level. THEY STINK!
REPEAT AFTER ME! THEY STINK, BURN THE RED ROAD TILES, USE THEM FOR SOMETHING ELSE

and stuff and stuff and stuff

I know, I was just using that as an example of something that could be put there.

I can't believe I am agreeing with an N-Pulse LAT, but yes, I agree.

I did that very fast and I randomly chose stuff to put on there.

I didnt quite get that the bottom middle part of the water stairs as the seat for your swings.?? And no I made that i have never played valikorlia

Yes, that is a major improvement over the levels I've normally seen from you. Altho, I still don't like the roof on that house in the top.

Well, I am trying to help for a reason ^_^;;

mmkay, Select Tile, look for the tiles for the Water Stairs (from the object Water Stairs), grab the bottom part of the platform, paste that instead of the outside chair/bench, it looks better 'cuz it's blue, and it works the same 'cuz it's a chair tile.

ken he is right about the roadd bravo and all the other servers used that and i knew that wou,ld have been a bad choice since i have been to EVERY server that i sup and almost all of them had that

How about this?

http://xgsoft.virtualave.net/toad/toad.png

Sagaquira News doesn't look centered, the way you've done the doors without a door gif looks bad, I've always thought of the lamps as an indoor object (yes, I know there are outside in the tutorial), I don't like the gif for the chair...For the windows, why is there light beaming out of them? Usually light beam in them. the bench on the carpet doesn't look right because of the edges of the bench have grass on them. The blue tiles in your path look like they are meant for a bathroom or something. Sorry if I make you feel bad about the levels you are making, I'm just trying to help out best I can.

Eh?

OOOOOOK I get what your saying now

ew. :( it is bad. needs improvement

Looks Nice.