Tileset OUTLINE
 

alright i just decided to open this thread with a recent tileset outline ive made for a factory type of building.
this image is grayscale and is not colored in.but i wanted to post this screenshot to taken in good comments and
negative comments. if you think anything should be fixed - added - removed
then feel free to reply. ill make sure to post the updates --- enjoy.

http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/8026/43537130xz2.png

proportions look good but you need to shade it better =D it looks so plain

Looks nice Cythus. And Elk, an entire server with the same theme would look good I believe.

im not gonna bother shading until its time to be colored :(
"outlines"

i really like it, only bit that bothers me is the huge grills on the left building, they look like they are hovering 0_o

in my eyes the whole pipeline and the grills of the roof makes no sense :O
they are totally wrong

oh yea, didnt notice the pipeline the way its attached to a invisible wall 0_o

I think it is a wall, but the shading makes it difficult to notice? I don't know.

if this i a wall all is ok ^^
iam waiting for the end product

Nice outlines...I really like the pipe.

Almost looks like you could use it as is for a flashback sequence :p

played around with it to make it more correct

http://home.graffiti.net/chrischi4u/blabuilding.png

Reminds me exactly of a certain place on battlefield 2 lol

the first pic made my eyes hurt, but the second clears it up a lot :D nice

ok please read the description. it was supposed to be "grayscale" for a reason.

looks damn nice

Omg kewl! Add sewege coming out of the pipe line :D

Lineart doesn't have to be grayscale. You should try to seperate objects from one another and make the lineart clear, especially if you want help from others.

the graphic is clear to the trained eye ;) at this stage its not supposed to be user friendly until its colored in.

It's mostly clear to you, because you drew it. But if you post it for others, if you really wanted help, you should try to make it as easily clear to us as possible. Finding someone friendly enough to help is hard, but don't make it a chore for those who do.

The ramps are too steep.