Tide-turning weapon
 

This is my first time submitting weapons of any kind to Zone and I think that I personally did a good job.

Name: Rhetorics
Type: Sniper Rifle
Ammo: Energy Shards
Speed: (Photon Cannon x2.5)
Clip: 10
Range: (Mortar x2)
Damage: 100
Shots/Second: 1
Other: When equipped, vision moves so you can see farther ahead of you (like mortar). This is a one hit K.O weapon, but you have a very limited amount of ammo and the shot rate is extremely low to avoid massive amounts of ownage.

its going to shoot really fast and really far and really strong. It will have a slow shot but its a bit overpowered I kind of like it. TO me personally it seems like a hack saw :D. Maybe you could make an opening blade and it opens and lets a strong burst of plasama out the is wide? Im not sure. Its way to strong. K.O. Weapons are made for zone sorry :p I really like the bullets though.

Your stats are crap, sorry its just to overpowered. But I like your GFX :).

stats suxorz but gfx is teh pwnage

any suggestions on what the stats should be?

I like the gfx but the handle is... questionable, it's ok but, you could improve

I forgot to put the up and down views in my last image... here it is.

An update, I made those little fiery things that come out when you shoot and I made the barrel longer.

Don't stop me now! Scope on top now :P
Thanks Dark!

DMG - 50 HP
Max Ammo - 20
Call the ammo, plasma sniper or something costs, 500 for 2 bullets, you start off with 10.
Shoots one shot per 2 seconds

everything else was okay, the mortar idea thing.

can you make the uhh handle part in the back have more shading and not be filled?

Yea ill get on that tomorrow. It actually does have detail in it but it is too subtle to tell.

I think the barrel (The top one) is far too long.

You have to work on...your shading, your outline...and your colors...and its too big...well I guess you should redo the whole thing.

I disagree, I think the outline and colours are great. The shading yes could use a little work in some areas. Its a little big but can be fixed easily.

Correction: If it were a less powerful weapon, it would be too big.

It has poor shading.

Pretty good GFX, Could be done a little smaller though? and like Huwajux said Shading... Other than that its Awsome

Alrighty. I made it smaller and tried the best i could to make it look clear (and i dont mean transparent)

I like it but whats the circle thinger in the back with lines? Maybe make those different shades of blue?? SO it looks like its charging then firing!! O!

Make the up/down barrels 3-5 pixels smaller.

It looks like you shaded if form th bottom up. try to make the light go down. Also just make a bullet sprite a rely on particles for the patial transparency

it looks okay, needs a bit more...
i dont know... just make the barrel a bit bigger by the rest of the gun and make The whole image a bit smaller

Blech @ GFX, make it darker.

Whoa thats one bad sniper rifle you can call it... RF cavity resonator sniper :D

I like it, and the gfx is kewl and all but it looks too much like the reapers i mean I see it as reapers in a recolor with a scope and a plasma ros in the side without the middle part.

Sorry, but your graphics are questionable as well. O_O

Questionable!?! they're pretty darn conflibebhsj. Yeah my graphics are questionable. But still Improvements can be made on the gun, personaly what the other people are saying is true just the handle is a little weird. I like my graphics questionable, they make people quetion the world around them (Like am I actually a person who likes to make GFX's)

please tell me thats only your outline. Not to be rude but it has no shading.......

When, I say questionable. I mean you have no right to criticize his GFX the way you have when your own need improvements.

Note: I am not saying I am the best either. But I don't go about making blatant and rude statements about others work when my own can get better.

So? Half the people who post on these forums critisize others work and they can't GFX. Just because ceserthen can GFX doesn't mean he can't critisize others work.

me can GFX bad but me can critisize good that is best logic for weedie bear

repeat that so i can understand....

me can GFX bad but me can critisize good that is best logic for weedie bear;)

wtf is a weadie bear XD?

lol, i was talking like i had an f-- in grammer and spelled wedgie bear really wrong