My Levels
 

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I know the outside level plain but i couldnt find that image i was looking for it would of set it off!!

Ok, I accidently replied to your other thread in the wrong section.


In the first one you should not have that crappy grass everywhere.

Second screenshot? I don't have much to say about that one really.

Keep trying :)

First off, using GFX from multiple servers in one level is lame. Second you didn't make all of that inside. I'm sure you used a style from somewhere else...

Yeah, ive seen that level before

Screw seeing a level before, look at the wall styles. First you have cool wallstyle then on the bottom you have all ugly brown brick wall. Also, a person who could make such a cool wallstyle (the top part) wouldnt have little noob graphics everywhere.

Also that's the npulse inside level floor style to clear confusion. xD

Images dont make the level, its the correct use of tiles and the tile arrangement that make the levels. Images and all that are just suppose to be a plus.

But I got a lil chuckle outa this, keep trying.

i serious i made the level tho

We are all serious as well, ya know. Go check out some other threads where levels seem to have gotten a decent rating.

Go check out some of the level tutorials as well.

We know you made the level, but we're saying that you have to develop your own style instead of just stealing styles from other servers. I agree with Crono, I've seen that wall style somewhere too, and taking graphics from other servers doesn't make a level either.

I suggest reading the tutorials that have been stickied in this forum, testing some of it out, looking over some of the other peoples work (Wan, Inferno, Crono, Myself (For outsides my insides suck :mad: ), Chicken, etc) and then try again.

But is that your own wall or did you steal it from somewhere? Your outside level also needs a lot of work...all you did was make some houses and put Delteria graphics on them. :P!

That outside level is horrible. No detail at all. Plus buildings dont look good. I see a couple tile errors in the inside. And im not liking the whole inside at all.

btw, who cares if he used a someone elses level style.

Obviously not you, but us. Just to answer your question.

10/10

the link won't work for me :cry:

Me neither, I was told to come and look at these levels again but I cant see them :( I realise what I said before and just wanted to check it ^^