1st Level Posted
 

Well this is my first time posting a level on these forums. Ive been leveling for about a year now but never thought of posting here well here goes.

Please rate out of 10

Constructive critism please

It's looking good man, but there's tile errors in the beach, the cliffs. and the lake thing is a we bit too straight, same with some of the out grass.

I don't like the house much. It's the walls I don't like, I like the roof XD. and the cliffs that go into your house (well behind) then out the other side make no sense. On th eleft its smaller and on the right side it's bigger maybe change either side.

and same with the water cliff tiles, they go directly into a house :X unless the inside of the house is meant to be all water and cliff tiles XD

There's a tile error where the brown dirt and those poles are bottom right. The very last pole (bottom one) goes into the dirt tiles looks uncool XD.

Aside from all that it's a cool level, I like the detailing it's nice and basic :D

When I walk outside, I don't see random arrows pointing to absolutely nowhere. Nor do I commonly see insane rooftops.
Yes, I am anti-new leveling style. :P

Lets see while your level has tile errors and stuff. House isnt coolieoz. Not because of the roof though...but guess what Luigi Maybe not know this but roof tops can havee tables and such on then IN REAL LIFE. I know its just a rumor but its true. Keep it on the DL yo.

I like your ground detail and your use of cliffs, although the section below the water looks like it could be better. :)

7/10

Yeah, I hate those little arrow things too... And those stupid green dealies next to them on the tileset. I want the compass tiles back! :(

As for the rooftop... I'm not sure if you're referring to the fact that it doubles as a patio, or the fact that it doesn't line up with the walls of the house at all...

The perspective on the house is all fiddle-faddle-foo... The pole-like parts on the ends of the walls are longer than the rest of the wall... Like they're stilts. 0.o;