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Jukebox
Well, I made a jukebox for my Pub on N-Pulse.
http://img7.exs.cx/img7/9817/np_shadowjukebox.png Feedback please! ^^ |
Nice, but you picked a boring perspective, but then again, it's the graal perspective so it's not your fault, but a bit too many colors for my taste ;(
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I like it :)
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Yes, very graal. It's good.
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It was made for graal that's why, lol.
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It's too flat. It needs depth.
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the graal perspective is on a angle so you can see most of the top and the front of the object...
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First one is better. Graal doesn't have a horizontal angel. I think what people ment about depth is to make certain parts of the Jukebox curve inside, or bevel out.
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and the shading on the top makes it appear that it is flat accorss the neon tube. perhaps kill the light on the tube and the shadow it should be casting. and work on that perspective a bit.
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its supposed to be for graal. gral isnt a side scroller. unless the jukebox is tipped over on one side, its drawn at the wrong angle
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Like mentioned, it's not at the proper graal angle. I went ahead and made an example of what the angle should actually be. Though this is kind of cheating because you need to change the front perspective to not show as much. But it works nonetheless... Oh, and don't mind the shading, I didn't detail it much I just kind of did it to show you what they mean.
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Koni! <3 .
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Nice to see your back on the forums, Konidias. :cool: |
Is he really back though?
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Also...I don't believe any of you mentioned this but...
You have shading in the upper left corner as if there's a light on it. Bright light. However, Juke Boxes are placed inside and there wouldn't need to be any...lighter shading there, eh? Nice job though, I like it :) Maybe slim it down a bit, as mentioned. |
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