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TeRRi2k 06-11-2004 03:45 AM

Long Lost Princess
 
(Or so Zoe calls it)

Deep in the Samurai/KJ caves... a young, lonely girl tries to find her way out... but no luck. She is hungry, she is tired, she feels frustrated. This girl is Hurumi.

She's been wondering in the caves for nearly a year. People say that she looks much like the previous Queen of Dustari, whos rumored to have been kidnapped and killed. She looks much like her...cept this girl is in her childhood, and the Queen was past her teens.

Queen Zoe found her wondering on the isle of Samurai half cognizant of all about her and brought her home to Dustari hiding her for a year to ascertain that Samurai would no longer come after her once they took the throne.

She is now a royal descendent of the throne. The child has a vague memory of her past, but nothing more than that.

(feel free to suggest/whatever. Part of it Zoe/Padren made up, some i added. But basically a lot of things in there goes again my story because
1. original hurumi is not even human therefore ageless, but now i'm a kid. so i need an explanation for that.
2. okay there are other problems but i can't think of them right now :P probaly what happened after I got kidnapped by samurais last year + why was i wondering around the caves, why didn't i get help and return home? etc.)

[ was bored: my rp char ^_^ she's around 13 and she likes acting like she's 5.

http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/.../hurucharl.png
chibi style! ^^; Does the apron look familiar to any of you? lol.]

Salli 06-11-2004 06:27 AM

Cute!!!! ;)

Monkeyboy_McGee 06-11-2004 12:39 PM

Nice work hurumi, the story's a bit basic, could possibly be beefed up a tad, but its kewl. Nice picture too, although...why's she got that trowel in her hand? Is she going to be laying some bricks or something? XD

TeRRi2k 06-11-2004 12:43 PM

..LOL
supposed to be my dagger. she's not strong enough to hold a sword.

suggest something to the story, if you have any suggestions :P

davidpsy 06-11-2004 12:59 PM

Hmm I have an idea, she is how she is because she is the queen only from another reality. You could say there was some portal to another reality in the cave and the queen steped in it and at the same time the queen from another reality and age steped in and the portal closed.

TeRRi2k 06-11-2004 01:07 PM

Welll but basically my char now (Hurumi) is same as the char when she was Queen. Cept nobody knows that besides her looking like the old Queen, and my char herself has no clue. So they're from the same reality basically ;P nice idea, cept that I don't know if it'll work well

Butz 06-11-2004 05:26 PM

Maybe something was done to her while she was held captive. Like maybe her captors knew that she was ageless, and tried to tap into that ability somehow, causing a magical accident which transformed the queen and clouded her memories, leaving her in a dazed state. Not knowing who or where she was, she stumbled into the caves, wandering.
Dunno just an idea.
Nice drawing too.^.^;
But you can't assume that daggers are going to be light weapons in the kingdoms. My brother has a dagger on his account that weighs 45 kg...
I'd like to see someone swing a 45 kg dagger...>.>

Salli 06-11-2004 05:50 PM

Maybe she thought that the cave would have some answers why she was there? And so she stayed at the cave until Queen Zoe found her...

Zero Hour 06-11-2004 07:07 PM

Or maybe a space ship flew from outer space and cloned her, then the rebel army marched in and took her back, but there was another army of clones... no wait that's star wars.

TeRRi2k 06-11-2004 07:51 PM

rofl

i like butz idea :) will add that to the story later, but wait, so her 'enemies' tried to 'tap' into that abilty somehow, causing a magical accident. What do you mean by tap into that :P
But no matter, i like the magical accident thing :P sounds coolee.

Myukoi 06-11-2004 08:10 PM

Neat, the picture is all mermaid melody style, though i don't see how that looks like the apron on the game.

TeRRi2k 06-11-2004 10:09 PM

it doesn't, not everything in the pic fits :P

oh yeah about the dagger, my char's dagger isn't even upgraded or anything, so its very light. Wee.

Monkeyboy_McGee 06-12-2004 02:11 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TeRRi2k
it doesn't, not everything in the pic fits :P

oh yeah about the dagger, my char's dagger isn't even upgraded or anything, so its very light. Wee.

Not dagger, trowel ;)

TeRRi2k 06-12-2004 02:26 AM

i assumed most people have already seen my in game char :P and icant draw daggers well :[

LoveableNalle 06-12-2004 04:43 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TeRRi2k
(Or so Zoe calls it)

Deep in the Samurai/KJ caves... a young, lonely girl tries to find her way out... but no luck. She is hungry, she is tired, she feels frustrated. This girl is Hurumi.

She's been wondering in the caves for nearly a year. People say that she looks much like the previous Queen of Dustari, whos rumored to have been kidnapped and killed. She looks much like her...cept this girl is in her childhood, and the Queen was past her teens.

Queen Zoe found her wondering on the isle of Samurai half cognizant of all about her and brought her home to Dustari hiding her for a year to ascertain that Samurai would no longer come after her once they took the throne.

She is now a royal descendent of the throne. The child has a vague memory of her past, but nothing more than that.

(feel free to suggest/whatever. Part of it Zoe/Padren made up, some i added. But basically a lot of things in there goes again my story because
1. original hurumi is not even human therefore ageless, but now i'm a kid. so i need an explanation for that.
2. okay there are other problems but i can't think of them right now :P probaly what happened after I got kidnapped by samurais last year + why was i wondering around the caves, why didn't i get help and return home? etc.)

[ was bored: my rp char ^_^ she's around 13 and she likes acting like she's 5.

http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/.../hurucharl.png
chibi style! ^^; Does the apron look familiar to any of you? lol.]

And why does it have to be caves of Samurai that she has to be in? Why not forest that has been deserted for long time now? Why is Kurenai Joukai being made the heavy here? I, Nayoko Miyamoto as Empress of Kurenai Joukai do protest!!!!!


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