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Well, erm, yeah, uhm... rate 0-10 plz.?
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Did you post the right level?
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Erm, it doesn't look outside-ish, does it?
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Floor - 2/10 clashing, overall disgusting. Walls - omfg it's a huge tile error -1/10. Overall: 1/10. Yuck. |
1/10, you need plants, everyone oves plants
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So very... bland. you need to explore the different configuration of the tiles together and come up with something more exciting. Yeah, the tileset sucks, but so does your light effects (which by the way, are off by +.1/.2x).
Anyway, if you want while effects, the level needs a darker hue, then it would go just perfect. Mabey add a bit more to the level, but dont crowd it because then it looks worse. :( And well, I don't rate levels, I give advice. |
1/10
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Bleh, tiling errors
1/10 |
The walls are ugly, tile errors almost every place, your windows doesn't look like windows... But I like a bit the style, 3/10
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floor tiles do not match at all, and i suggest sticking to normal style walls o.o...
good effort though.. 3/10 |
I like the floor :(
3/10 |
Practice makes perfect. ;)
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nice... but...
window and its lighting... nuff said... perhapse take the clear square window NPC image that would fit there and instead of the top part being black, make it look like you're looking outside (in other words, put a few grass tiles there..) and the windows will be fine... except for the lighing... that's pretty easy though, just crop it a bit to fit the area... paint'll do. nice effort for the walls, but they just don't look inviting.... trial and error with these... really, you want to make them elaborate, yet simple... elegant, yet general... i like the floor... but others may not... that's the curse of the LAT.. what you like others may not.. and for the corner pillars... the tops have green at the corners, since this is an outside tile... BUT DON"T FRET! just take the tileset, open in paint, and make the corners black. then save the image (as a .jpg or .gif... i do both) and use that image as a NPC. the black'll cover the corners up. and perhapse make a little bit bigger... it looks too crowded... and after you make it bigger, add a colorful NPC or two.... possibly a lamp, a plant, or a picture. there ya go. (PS. this is how I want my ratings done... like this... cover every possible detail that you can... and offer sugestions...) overal, it's coming along great. just needs some work, and it'll be server material! (ps... i don't rate... i give colorful criticism and help.) |
The lights are nice, but the walls are weird.
2/10 |
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