Rate Levels
 

Rate this 2 levels, and tell me what you think

this one is made by me.

and this one is wan's, he wanted it rated to.

Nice work. :)

Your's - 8/10
Wan's - 8/10

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AHHHH THE TILE ERRORS!!!! 7/10 7/10...nuff said

Re: !!!!
 

0.0? point out where the tile errors are

they both seem a little crowded.. maybe open up the little spot northeast of the cave entrance on yours a little more to make the house more easily accessible?

Let me see if i got this straight, my english isnt that good so.. :P

you want me to take down the cave cliff more so you can go to the house easier above it?

also heres wan levels with lights :)

The cliff on the right side of wan's level looks a bit off
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and I swear I've seen that first level before... just not detailed. Speaking of the detail, it's all the same type (in the first level) so it makes the level kinda boring to look at.

Its maibe your eyes that doesnt work 100%?

Since i made this level today and wan was with me when i maded it, impossible for you to have seen it earlier.

eatherway, yes im going to change that, AND i asked for rating.

1st level:
- Many tile errors.
- Cliffs need quite a bit of work. The design is quite nice, but the tile errors need fixing so they look neater.
- I noticed that the same exact cut swamp tile was pasted in a few sections. You might want to add some variety instead of using just one swamp tile. It could make the level look a bit more interesting.

Everything else seems fairly okay.
Rate: 5.5/10

2nd Level
- Seems a bit familiar. I think it was shown before but this one looks like it was fixed up. !Wan made it right?
The bottom design looks a bit better.
- Also for this level the cliffs could use a little bit of work. They too have tile errors around them.
- The house looks quite nice. It has an interesting design to it. I just don't like the bench with the green grass in it. I think it would look better with the other chairs that doesn't display the grass parts. Or maybe just take the other bench with the grass and make a graphic and cut out the grass part?

Rate: 7/10

Wan doesn't steal levels, he's too good for that. Besides if you wanted to steal levels he'd steal from me! Since im so good ya know. *wink*

First level is too..crowded. Personally I don't like the whole mountain spam, I don't care how hard it is to make them or how much "1337 skillz" it takes to make them..they're just..ugly..In big crowds anyway.

Wan's level, no comment.

I didn;t mean to say he stole it, I just ment I thought maybe he had posted it somewhere before, jsut not detailed, or maybe I saw a screenshot of a level that looked kinda like that one.

and sorry for not rating before, I'd say about 6/10 for both, just because the one's big cliff was kinda strange, and I didn't like the detail... and the one with the small cliffs looked kinda the same all over, which made it kinda boring
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Pretty much what everyone else has said, the cliff tiling is not very good... alot of noticable errors on both. The first level also does look a tad crowded.

First level: 6/10

Second level: 7/10

i am a bit picky, but I won't vote...
on the first level, if you look at the upper house corners, you can see that there is a noticable sliver of green headed out into the sand. try the upper corner sand tile. it might work better... also, on the chimneys, don't use that one, take the double chimnet and cut it to make just one (join the top 2x1 to the bottom 2x1) and use that instead. it would go better with the overal house design.

also, remove some cliffing. it really doesn't take 1337 skills to make cliffs, but remove a pew areas, like the one just southeast of the house. and one more thing, here's a tip when copy/pasting over a large area. copy, then paste over a piece of what you copied, then do it again in a different spot. this way, it looks like you did it by hand... somewhat... i'm more of an indoor level person.

About your level Jaffer, I don't like your house and I think there are to much cliffs... 6/10
About Wan's level, I like his house and how the cliff goes, but I don't like that stairs or whatever that is... 7/10