Level
 

Ok, Heres a new level Ive been working on. I realize there are some tile errors and stuff but i wanna get you guys/girly opinion before i go any further. Keep in mind this is the first level Ive made in about a year.

Okay then, you weren't the person I thought you were.

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Who did you think I was?

i thought you were echos :0!

You need to group your grasstiles, it looks really bad like that, by itself scattered over the level.

I like it like that. If all my grass in my yard was grouped then I would spend only half as much time cutting grass as I would now.

Average. 5/10.

There's detail, but it's not good. The mountains look alright, and the river needs a lot of work.

The detailing looks too ordered. For a wilderness setting, things should be chaotic, while falling into typical boundaries. Like there should be rocks on the edge of a stream, and grass and swamp in would-be shadowed areas.

Your grass tiling is crap, the canyon doesnt look like a canyon its to green. I recommend doing something similar to this style I made a while back to simulate a dried up river. It would definatly make the level look more canyon like. All in all I like that you're making a canyon not something alot of people do. Just need to focus on how to make it look realistically like a canyon. :cool:

http://forums.graal2001.com/forums/a...&postid=832555

Detail needs work, as in the grass and the river and such. Tile errors on cliffs as you said. Get those fixed and i'll rate ya a 6.5/10

hmm
maybe some waterfalls and lighteffects :)
then hmmm maybe a house in top of the mountain and then some chairs and tables :)

But its ok :)
for a start