A level... again
 

Hey i posted this for !Wan how ya like it?!, It's not done yet, it's for Spanky and !Wan's server Krynn if Spanky like's it;).. Anywho post some comment's on what to improve.. (the bottom half of the level is spanky's :p) O-well, enjoy...
Also !Wan says:
Ill finish the level some other time, busy right now
:D
ps -Zesty

O-well (again!) enjoy :)

Crap, forgot to attach :/
Keep day dreaming
* Touch me n then just touch me till i can get my satisfaction *
Darnit Video :p

wow I like the use of color and the little inlet that you created at the bottom of the waterfall. I think that's very unique :D Water levels always get to me lol, but I think this one has a very true-to-nature look without too many details and without so many that it looks fake. good job

Except for the fact that that much water could not constantly supply the waterfalls.

hmm yea but there are many inconsistencies in that level that would make it separate from the real world, i'm just stating that the style appears in my eyes in a way that would seem to flow smoothly on a mountain in the real world :)

O-well it's a game :)
Thank's for the posetive comment's, any idea how i make it become real life type? :)

eh..?
 

Wtf you guys talking about the real world and **** on a game...XD
Well i dislike Wan's path linings. He always put 2 paths into one which looks kinda ugly to me. Seems almost everyone does it now days. People dont consider it a tile error. But it is. If he cuts down on that about 99.8%? ;] It could be better. Plus make more curves on the path lining. :o water and stuff looks excellent. Its looking good so far. kthx
:megaeek:

Correction
*Not a tile error, creative*
Show me a sexy path what isnt a tile error, or in my case creative
:p

I like it but I think the three trees in the shape of a triangle doesnt fit. Maybe a bit more.. deranged?

tree
tree tree

o.o
 

thats not creative it looks like shet

It's not bad, but its not t3h own. Mayb when its renamed notdone. to done we can see it? :)

Hmm..the layout is over average, post it again when it's done.

I lost the lebel >< :D
lol sorry..

Just found it whilst editing andor ;)
Here is a screeny!
btw, the top of the tree (top right) is a gif:p
Also, the cloud, i kinda used the one's on 2k2, the terr shadow's i think it look's good, but it's up to you to decide :)
O-well my level edited : :p

Clouds don't have that obvious an effect on the ground below them. It looks like there are things going to attack from the sky.

Depend's on how you look on it:)

I think those shadows were supposed to be made for trees, not clouds. No offense.

Trying to be creative :p

Clouds should be npc scripted. Maybe a showpoly or something and then light effects for a translucent shadow. It would be awesome cause then you could have it move like an amoeba !

Hrmm showpoly, lol lot's of line's then?, seteffectmode #;?

Ssshhh! Don't tell the waterfalls ;)

Looks good.. i see one tile error at the top left of the waterfall, about 3tiles left and 3 tiles up

Other than that i see no problem =)

8.5 i'd say:cool:

Thank you, and thank's for reporting the tile error ;)

Posting unfinished levels is rather silly.

The second level isn't bad, 8/10.

Thank's:), Unfinished level's look good in my opnion :o

yep. level looks good, i don't think anyone posting here now could make something like that even if they say it looks like "shet", besides me. ;) of course heh. layout looks good, grass detailing is ok, grass "lineing" looks nice. Cliffs were created correctly (hard for a lot of people to do). Based on the current standards of this forums quality in level designing I present this piece a 9/10.

If I were to grade it about 6 months ago when there were good level makers around besides 3 then i'd give it a 7-8/10.