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Liek OMG my first level!!!!11 Rate please :P

It looks like an old, deserted playhouse from Delteria. Detail it more, and don't use so many predefined objects. 3/10

I made all the barrels and such, because my plan was a bakery ._.
Oh well, how do you detail floor? carpets? :P

Yea it is pretty plain. Be a bit more creative like using different house tiles and such. Those light effects to are bad being those are the default ones lol. So fix those up to. Like make them flickering lamps.

:rolleyes:

Rate it! :'(

It's good for your first level but there s a problem with the plants. There are alot of decor you can use that look alot better than these and will fit nicely. 7/10 (for first level =D)

ok, i made the uber-eye-hurting floor design! WATCH AND GROAN IN PAIN! :p

And outside, rate rate rate!

I added some more detail to the grass :D

I might wanna add the file ._.

Your outside still needs more detail but I like how you spiced up the inside ;)

Ok, fixed up both levels! First inside!

and then outside! Rate, rate, rate!

Added an oven to the bakery! Tell me what to do better please :P

For future reference, since you aren't using lighting effects as of yet, use Alt+1 instead of Alt+2.
But nice levels - for your first attempts, I must admit.

why use ALT+1? Then i wouldn't get the ligh effects with on the pic :confused:

He just said why.

Not bad for your first attempts. You should see my first level..made before light effects were legal :P

But i use light effects! -.-'

1/10 on both. Inside needs much more variety and detail, as well as the outside. It's pretty good for your first attempt though, good work.

bleh, i'm kinda on a stand still with level making, but thanks to you all for helping me getting better! :)