Please rate
 

Please rate my forest playground, this is the 2nd level ive ever done the first one was just testing lights, please post how i can improve it

Re: Please rate
 

That's pretty nice for a second level, you say. My second level looked like atlantis *evil laugh*... I will say a few things that may help you with your third level..

1. The grass tiling is too straight, try to randomize it a tad.
2. Ice Castle Stairs in a forest playground... Rar.
3. The waterslide looks like it's on the other side of a white wall, and there is a gray walk way through a hall to get to the top... which is this case is flat... So it's not a waterslide after all, it's more like those Slip N' Slide things they advertise on TV about.
4. The two big green rock things are straight across from each other... this isn't that big of a deal but... ebil:(
5. The big brown blob in the middle looks like a murdered tree trunk family (and shouldn't really be used like that)
6. You could add some grass, flowers, and other detailing to the level.. Search the pics1 and find all the tiles you would need, this will help you to make a nicely detailed level when it comes to making it because you will know where the tiles are.
7. Ehh not much more I can think of to say, just beware of making tile errors and stuff. Try to make everything look realistic and "3D yet 2D" by using the right tiles..

Your pal,
Oink

Oh sorry I forgot, i'll give you a 6/10 because, like you said, it was your second level and I thought you did rather well. :)

That's pretty good for a second level, it has it's own charm x.X I'll give it a 3+2(For it being second level) /10

4/10

Straight stuff is bad unless it is a wall. Water and such should look more random than if it was cut out in straight lines. Small green rocks are annoying as they block people. Try throwing in a couple of different ground tiles and clump a little.

1. is this level based on reality?
2. tile more, personaly i think swamp is something that usually isnt in inside levels?
3.too straight
4. its the 2 level so k
2/10

5/10, only because it's your second level.

Read above posts to see how you can improve it. My second level was worst..

1. Need to fix that tree table, kinda looks... weird? I dunno how to say it..
2. Like bo0ey said.. Ice stairs in a forest level? pfft..

Anyways. I think it was nice, as for a second level.. hmm

7/10:megaeek:

Wow, i like the wall's very creative!
Infact the whole level is creative!
Goodjob:)
7/10=D!

no offence but 7/10 is a bit overating, i mean are you denoris freinds or something?


wtf

Yes i did rate it.
Also, it's a good level very creative.

Sorry snake but your overrateing tomuch well yes the
walls is a little creativ.
But if a wall should be creativ it must be alot of curves and stuff not just a straight wall.
and the floor is really straight and so are the big grass...
I would give this 3/10

Rember to use these tiles on grass too(see attached), you can spilt the first one up like i did in my 2nd level (First outside :P)
And you got tile errors at the chair north from the tree trunk table, Try using the outside chairs too, they fit better ;P

http://forums.graal2001.com/forums/s...threadid=46738

(See my level here, near the buttom of the thread)

This level is more of a ****let cadet type of level. Im guessing it's one of your first levels.

Its too "basic", too much to explain x_X!

2/10