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I havn't posted one of these in awhile so I will post, :)

Rate it 1-10

Grass is OK, it needs some work.
Swamp on bottom.. You should use those other swamp tiles for the edges so it doesn't look like crap.
The waterfall looks kinda... strange.. Maybe move the top of it down alittle more.

AND, the level isn't great... HOWEVER.. I like it 'cause it's UNIQUE.
It doesn't look like all the other levels that you see on here =p.
Good job, nice idea, and nice layout.

Water:
The water is nice at the bottom. Good use of all the tiles that are available to you. But on the dark blue above the higest point on the bottom piece of grass if you put a full dark water tile above it, that would fill that error. I dont know, maybe a few rocks!?

Bottom Grass:
Use the other swamp tiles to give it a more smooth look to the swamp, instead of jaggered edges.

Detail:
I would use a few more tiles for the grass, as it looks a bit dry. Maybe fade the path out by using a few of those gray blocks at the ends of the path by them selves for a while!

Overall:
Not bad, very delterian style! =D
Keep it up, maybe make the grass a bit more fuller, but overall its good.

Sparks Rating: 6.5/10

I like it.

Tiling: 6/10 (Some things are used too often and too much, and I don't understand a stump with a chair in it...)
Errors: 7/10 (I didn't see many of these...)
Creativity 8/10 (Bridge is a nice addition)

Overall: 7/10 (A nice level)

Rating: 5/10

5/10

The chair on the tree looks really bad. Also the water fall is wayyy to long for the length. The top needs to be down closer to the cliff and the bottom needs to be shorter. Would look more natural. Also the bushes make the level look a little cluttered. Maybe alternating them with something else. Bottom area is what makes the bushes look cluttered for the most part. With a few edits this could be an above average level.

6/10

I dont like the bridge and this waterfall,
but the river is very g00d.

6/10
The bridge is funky but i like it

My rating: 7/10....I think it looks alright. I like that bridge alot. Think ive seen that level on Delteria.

;) , you have.

Yeah Mykel was Development Admin at one point I belive.

Indeed I was. :)

Grass Detail

I never like a level with a lot of flowers in it. The level seems to be of decent quality grass wise.. but it could use a lot of work. Try adding some dirt stuff or anything to make it look more orignal from its current state.

water detail

Don't use that deep stuff in such a short amount of water that you have there.
1.) Tile errors will become a regular thing when you have a short amount of space to get it fixed.
2.) It doesn't look too good like that.

Grass to water

I don't like those tiles being used in this level. you should use some shore tiles instead, it'll look a lot better.

Cliff Tiles

Needs some different variations... doesn't look good like that too much.

Overall

Looks better then a lot of people can do... but it can use a lot of things to help it out. Good try!

Rating

4.5-5/10

Thanks Guys. :)

Dark water in a small river or stream is a no-no. I don't give ratings, because they are just based on my opinion about levels, since no one can agree on a general standard. I pefer to give my opinion through my words and not through numbers, because they don't tell alot.

Pretty good....after seeing that 'kenyonandelliot' level it made me feel pretty inside to see a nice outside level like this :)
7/10

haha, lol. =D
Yeah well I dont think he tried must on his CTF level.