my 3rd level
 

rate please
on scale 1 to 10 ;)

-my 3rd level i ever maked-

It's okay, nothing special though. 5/10. I don't get why the theme of the room is all brownish-castle-like, then you put in metalic weird bank-like things :|

here another level (had to take a ingame screeny because of light effects so i just splice the screenies in 2 :p)

and the down part of it ;)

and the bank like things are just because its an bank X,x

Well, this is just my opinion, but with the bank things, I think you should make tiles that go along with them. Otherwise, you see a whole house-like theme of a room, then there's a laser, and metalic thingys O_o

And with the other levels, they're good, 7/10, but I don't really care for how plain the street light things are. They're just solid grey on the poles.

The levels are nice or at least I like them.
Although I do have one probelm with them.
The custom graphics you have added, laser thingy and lamp poles really don't fit into those levels.
I suggest you remove them and use the small lantern on a post.
Would probally fit into the level better.

The first level: I've seen worst

outside levels: Not bad


first level the custom graphics just delete them they really look bad.

Outside I didnt look to closly for errors but one thing stood out at me is the stairs they look messed up might want to fix them.

All in all you have quite a bit of potential. Currently you're skilled enough to have a decent chance at getting a job as lat some where assuming you dont already have one. :) One thing I really liked is how your levels dont look super cluttered and hard to walk through.

nothing new special but i will give ya a 5 on the outside level cuz of da *****ayness of the cowz

You seem to be quite good for someone that just started out with making levels.
I'll give a 6/10 overall on all the levels you posted.

Intresting use of tiles for a first level, keep the level making up!

thank you all
can you guys show me an example of youre styles ?
i wanna lear sumfin better then that :megaeek: ...

Hop on Graal Bomy Moon if you want to see some of my work would be happy to show you.

those laser things are from UN's Tarnathia wrestling ring located near the north east corner where there is a cluster of houses

i maked them myself,
i have the original BMPs laying here.... x.x

Search for threads made by Knuckles in this fourm.
He has nice levels.

thanks again !

btw the bank like lasers move up and down..
thats why those lasers are that close together ;)
they have a 5 line script inside of em ;)