Level Opinion
 

Any suggestions would be appreciated.

Bridge is not so nice, but looks good. Unique. Never seen that style before.
The river has alot of "straight lines" in the shallow-to-deep water tiles.
Them big yellow balls. Get rid of them. :)

I'd suggest more detail in the grass, dont totaly rmeove bridge, make it more clear. And get rid of yellow balls.

Nice level but the bridge is horrible!

Hm, thanks for the suggestions.

I tried to touch it up a little bit:

the river is uber cool :D!!!

Riverbanks are a bit too squarish, the mine entrance's roof doesn't appeal to me, and the way the grass edges look around the stone path doesn't look very good.

Great bridge, and the level as a whole looks cool!

There is some tile errors in the water. In the bottom-left corner fix the path, the grass/dirt boarder tiles don't really fit. All in all its about average. 6/10

Firs off i would like to say, clump the grass more, they are all spread out.

While you clump the grass add some cut swamps X_x



rating:5/10 for now.


A bit to stright

Only thing that looked off was the deep water tiles... they look... sharp...? There isn't really a good way around that and it's certainly creative, but it doesn't really look quite right...

overall 9/10 still, nicely done

how can you get a 9/10?
these days ratings are too high

funky bridge, work on the water =)

someone sent me that level in a lat tryout and it wasnt you.

Urk! :(

Are you sure? my e-mail is [email protected], maybe I sent it..

They could have at least stolen a better level. -_-

I like the bridge in the first screenshot. It's original and looks very cool. Only part that really needs work is the water. Maybe a bit more detailing for the grass.