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rate and give explenation why you gaved that rating, thanks.
Oh, yes i forgot to tell, its a race, so the poles will stay where they are. |
4/10
Grass detailing is very repetitive with only a few detailing tiles used. Also, since those poles are staying, I would suggest making some images for when they go over the dirt. When they go over the water you should use the fence tile that goes directly down, because the pole would go down into the ground of the water. Also, I don't care for the path too much, I like the path used as it was intended to be, with the four inside path tiles used and the two you used in this on the outside. |
lotsa tile errors, but not bad...keep workin.
5/10 |
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inside level!
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actuly i told you this already, i got that idea wich i used some times from Frolic, there main level long time ago. I like that kind of style and i use it often =O? |
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good except for the grass, it shud be bunched, not equally spread out. 6.5/10 (outside level)
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Outside Level -
Path: Well this is ok, but its get boring after a few seconds due to the mass of greyness! The stakes make it look horrible as you see water goes straight to grass, try and use the other stake more to the left, one without the bottom to it. Detail: Water, dirt path, and trees are fine, but everything else isnt that nice. The grass detail seems to be a right clicker which is horrible. And also there isn't enough dark green in the grass detail, and the other path looks out of place. Sparks Rating: 5/10 -Sorry for a low score, but the grass and paths let you down. Inside Level - Shape: This is nice, but the tile errors in the bush looks horrible. Floor: This is great really nice, brilliant use of tiles for a floor, brings lots of color and intrest to the level! Problems: -Door at top (Looks Weird) -That brown roof (Can see grass) -Castle tiles at top (Looks boring compared to bottom) Sparks Rating: 8/10 -Just a few things to make better. |
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---------------------- I'm going to do a quick rating here. Gots to go to school.. First Level- O.o' Nice path. ;) Thoouggh.. If you wanna make it real spiffy ( If it's for a server event ) Make an image for the post with a black bottom or something to that extend.. Maybe Blue. And if you do do that, put deep water on the sides. 7/10 Second Level- O.o' Right..Don't know how to rate this level with out smacking my self.. I'm thinking 8/10 aswell. Nice Lay out. X_x |
Inside:5/10
Outside:4/10 |
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your first level isnt very good i think!
there are lots of tile errors and the worst is that the grass tiles are under the fences! the second levels is cooL! but one tile error is on the edges on the grass! |
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Does anybody else see it? Timp- http://forums.graal2001.com/forums/a...&postid=751101 Jaffer- http://forums.graal2001.com/forums/a...&postid=755495 |
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And just personally, I'm going to make a wild assumption that you are pissed off at me for some reason because you called me an idiot / ***** in the same post when you could really tone it down a bit, think about it, mr. "bad ass". |
truth is, it doesnt look like tiling is copied either, they are diffrent not even nearly to be copied.
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cant we all... just get it on?
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