Rate level plz.
 

Im working on a server, Mystica Online.
Anyway, Rate this level.

Allright, first off clump it. Tile it more i dont like the roads or house.

rating would be 5/10 if you tiled the level and clumped it ok.

rating: 3.5/10 for now.



Keep working on it becuse i feel your not done with that level yet.

Erm.. Whats bad there is the abusive Path Generator you used. It's hard to make a path with those things. :\

Sorry I don't have time for a big explination as I do for others. Have to get my schoolin'

ok there are alooooot of basic things wrong here. First two things not to do with outsides that you did here.
1) don't cut off the level with black on outsides...ever.
2) don't use path gen unless you're going to drastically change it afterwards.
besides that its highly undetailed, detail in clumps with weeds and whatnot. Also, the house could be much better. Keep working though.
3.5/10

It's the end of the level... XD

Ok, some things.
1. Black must go.
2. The house, change that, looks dumb with three supports that don't even fit. Good idea but it would look a lot better with wood supports.
3. Don't use path generator or use it as an outline and go back through to get rid of the many rocks.
4. Detail, use more detail tiles. Take a look around in these forums, it's a very common thing that makes your level looks nice.
5. Keep at it. Don't get discouraged, if you're just beginning level making it's a good start.

Rating: 2/10

(I don't rate high, don't take it personally.)

Re: Rate level plz.
 

5/10

Work with the terrain.

Lack of detail wont put the PW in a good word. I think you should look at the levels you have and maybe think about going over them and reducing blankness before making more levels.

Grass Detail:
Well this looks like a right-click. Which is bad as it looks repeative, and most people who use right-click would atleast rightclick a big detailed chunk with less gaps.

Paths:
This looks like you used the path editor and didn't edit it much yourself, most thing people hate about it is the mass of rocks, so you have taken them out, but you have to add a few things to replace them.

House:
This is OK, but it would have been nice to see the top of the house not just the bottom, also the shadowing is good, but it looks weird with the stands and stairs because the far right bit on the house isn't being held up.

Other:
I personally wouldn't add flows in the middle of the swamp without adding a pace with no thick swap and it looks like a tile error. Also rocks and bushes look a bit weird just placed randomly.

Sparks Rating: 4/10
-Its lacking alot here, also about the black, this would work well if you were trying to get the classic Zelda feel to the PW, but other wise, get rid of it. But I think that you edited that in with a pain program.

Wow, such low marks... no wonder.....

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