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Ricky_Kreidel 11-18-2002 02:55 AM

Rate my House!
 
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Kiluminati 11-18-2002 03:23 AM

Overall rating: 4/10

They lack detail :(. The orange and blue colors clash too much IMO.

Spark910 11-18-2002 04:01 AM

Ok here goes, Marks are based on these 4 levels, not all the levels Ive ever seen. So he can see how one is better than the other.

Overall:
Not bad, but try and use different floor tiles, as I can see the brown and blue tiles on the floor in all of the levels!

First One (e):
By the looks of this, its a house where staff or a guild can go up the top! Not bad, the floor is ok but blend in too much with the chairs! The wall to divide the normal players and staff/guild is good, but it just stops and should continue into the wall!

Rating: 5.5/10

Second One (a):
The floor is the same as its the same house I know but it could vary a bit! Anyway this is good except the doorways, they are too big and plain! Either make them smaller or stick with the normal doors as they are fine and look good enough. The waterfall looks great! But im not so keen on the fire where it is,as it just looks as if it hovers there!

Rating: 6/10

Third One (b):
This spar level, or so im guessing, is interesting. The floor where you actually spar would be better one color and less exciting as it may put players off, also it doesnt look that nice in big spaces. I dont think you need 2 lines of them castle tiles to divide them! 2 would be fine. What would be cool is some sort of table and pub chairs where people could sit at! Door way is better, and the walls are not bad!

Rating: 6.5/10

Fourth One (f):
This is great, You spoilt it with the blue and brown tiles, if you had the red and brown like on the left this would look GREAT! I think the chairs would be better in the middle and not on the ends of the table. I think just normal castle walls would have been good in here!

Rating: 8/10

Sparks Offical Overall Rating: 6/10
Different use of tiles are good, but some dont go as good as others, have a play around with some! Try other tiles for the floor try and stick to color scheme, so dont mix blue with red, but do different shades or blues or reds, this way it blends and looks nicer.

SupermanJR 11-18-2002 05:34 AM

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Wow. Quiet a few levels you go there. Heres my rating ( For beginer)
First Level
Pros-
1.In the upper area of the level, the ground you have there looks nice. Keep that.
2. Nice job with the pillars. Looks pretty cool.
Cons-
1. The lower ground is awful. Don't use that. Ever.. again.. x.x "Liek.. Omi.. Liek the color.. Liek.. clashes. omi"
2.Stray away from the Default castle tiles.. It looks very boring.
Rating-7/10
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Second Level
B]Pros-[/B]
1.Err.. I like the Waterfall. Looks cool.
2.Nicejob with the images.. x.x
Cons-
1.You have those colors clashing again.
2.Your doors are HUGE..That looks really bad.
Rating-4/10 (This one isn't so hot)
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Third Level
Pros-
1.Nice job with the walls.
2.The Lower part of the floor is great.
Cons-
1.The floor in the upper area is bad again. Lol.
2.The Barrier thing you have down there.. That's not so good.
Inless this is for Babylon, change it.
Rating-8/10
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Pros-
1.Great Job on that one.
Cons-
1.Just the floor on the right side. x.x
Rating-10/10
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Overall-Rating-6/10
Keep it up bud, we need more level makers. Nice job bud.

Cid_Night 11-18-2002 09:21 AM

i like your attempts at making your own walls and floors...but neither are very appealing to the eye. They need alot of work, but imagining you are a beginner, it's a good start....4/10

Waltz5 11-18-2002 10:36 AM

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Originally posted by Cid_Night
i like your attempts at making your own walls and floors...but neither are very appealing to the eye. They need alot of work, but imagining you are a beginner, it's a good start....4/10
Yes the others were being too nice.
There is a lot of room for improvement, but most of that comes in time. So keep at it.


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