this needs to improve crc plz
 

here this iz a level i made i just dun know what to do with it it seems so empty and stuff so plain could someone plz crc this and tell me how this level could improve
(if thats possible :( )

That level lacks.. detail.. Add more detail. A whole lot more detail.

umm
 

half grass is butt ugly =D

Ugh, try adding swamp tiles and adding water and mushrooms

try adding a few more trees or some thing, and clump your detail, there is a good few things you can use, and the mushrooms are evil:d

Ok ill rate it from a begginers point of view, then give you ideas.

Rating:

Paths:
Amazingly alot of fiarly good level makers mess up on these and you have showed that you can do them, as theya re perfect although maybe a few bits of water/stones/grass pathes to add tone and color to the level (I feel you will be a good level maker later on!)

Water:
Once again, this is great, alot of people also mess up on this or things like this are their weak points! Not bad, nice maybe add some water-rocks/patches of grass/shallow water/deep water/ripples. But generally its very good.

House/Trees:
The reason thats at the top is maybe as you haven't yet learnt how to do alot of trees joined together, so putting it at the top gets you out of having to do difficult tiling. But the house/tree house floor is nice and original.

Pub/Bar:
Not bad, this is interesting and nice. It is in a nice place which works well.

Grass Detail:
This is the reason it lacks detail. There isn't much here. Also try and use the whole part of that long grass, and not just once side else it looks horrible and like it tile error.

Sparks Begginer Rating: 7/10
Sparks Normal Rating: 4/10

-Ignore the Normal, thats based on all levels Ive ever seen, Its just there as a quide so you can see you have things to improve/work on!

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Improvements:

Things to add to fill the level more:

Trees
Stones
Bushes
Grass (See Screenshot/Attachment)
Houses

Changes:
Change the path a bit to make it more interesting. Add some swamp and stones and bushes and maybe a few odd trees, use Yellow. Thats will add alot of color to the level!

Grass:
Ok look at my screenshot and try some tiling like that instead of leaving it all blank!