ok but what about this one
 

i tried tiling on this buit i still seek preoffessional and the peoples oppion so take a look at this plz.
plz comment too on everything and anything you liked or was wrong thanks
~yonkazz aka The Man (Elite Mercenaires)

Add detail, avoid patterns and symmetry(sp)... Don't write things on the tops of houses, give more space to walk...

You're trying to go waaaaaaay too big, in my opinion.
What are you making (that house for)?

Honestly, that's not so good, but you said for suggestions. For one, don't use repetitave brick tiles. You may want to consider using other tiles for walls. For two, the roof should be more decorated. And last, detail. It's all in detail. O_o

Agreed.

And remember, bigger doesn't mean better. Try to find a happy medium atleast so you're able to add in different tiles to the brick.

thats huuuuuuuge and geometrically incorrect, make it correct so it would work in real life and then use more tiles, and it will slowly progress.

thanks for the opion
 

im gonna work on my skills but to answer earlyer question its for a ph i wanna try to get on 2k1 server

Re: thanks for the opion
 

x.x 2k1 has it's own, well, "style" of level making. Mainly lots of trees and grass tiles. Levels with giant houses like the one above aren't anything like 2k1.

Re: thanks for the opion
 

ho ho ho ho

Re: Re: thanks for the opion
 

Did you give my SN to some crazy person? @_@;

The bushes on top of the fence do not work.
I advise never using them like that again.

The house is way to big and repetative.
Make it smallerand add some originality into it, not alays using the same tiles, especially the brick ones.
They don't go well repeated numerous times. :(

ugh...reminds me of my brother's skill, he's never made a level in his life.

:cool: Chee IS Cool...And Green

0,1/10


sowwy
no detaling i dont like the house


:D

This is my 4 year old nephew's first level, and i think it is way better :D