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briguy544 10-09-2002 01:07 PM

Rate Please
 
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A house i made for classic, first ive ever put anything up here. Just been getting into level making very recently. I still need to fill in the area around the house, but just rate the house itself please. I welcome criticizm as long as its constructive :)

SupermanJR 10-09-2002 04:39 PM

6/10. Keep looking around the tile set.There some things in there to make your house better (Including a window with no attached bottom) Pretty good for a begining level artist. I like it.

briguy544 10-10-2002 08:05 AM

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Here it is again, with some improvements on this house, and filling in the area around the house.

Dude6252000 10-10-2002 08:33 AM

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Originally posted by briguy544
Here it is again, with some improvements on this house, and filling in the area around the house.
The house is okay, but the parts around it is too dull yet x.x

briguy544 10-10-2002 12:08 PM

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ok here it is again to the point where i feel im done, im really happy with it, spent lots of time and effort on it, let me know what you think :)

Dude6252000 10-11-2002 12:48 AM

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Originally posted by briguy544
ok here it is again to the point where i feel im done, im really happy with it, spent lots of time and effort on it, let me know what you think :)
That's better. 7.5/10ish

HEALER101 10-11-2002 02:13 AM

x.x 4/10, x.x, level isnt that good, add like detail...or sumtin...and no origionality, delteria is made out of those houses

briguy544 10-11-2002 02:25 AM

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Originally posted by HEALER101
x.x 4/10, x.x, level isnt that good, add like detail...or sumtin...and no origionality, delteria is made out of those houses

any more specific suggestions? and never been on delteria :\

nikoma5000 10-16-2002 04:33 PM

There are no details. The lvl is very empty 3/10

Cid_Night 10-16-2002 11:24 PM

the last one is good, the house could be more interesting, just keep playing with it...needs alot more detail ya know, just keep working with the tileset and finding new ideas, very good for a new level maker though.....6/10


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