My Island
 

Hey guys, here's an i island i made for Asteria, whadda you guys think of it?
Plz point out any tile errors etc.
thx

Here's the next:

and the next:

and last but not least:

Nice
 

i like but i think you should use more then just the original sand paths and add detail in the water and it would be ok ^_6

not bad
needs waves...no big deal...
umm....tall grass (swamp tiles) here and there in patches...
in that last screenshot, right above the two bushes there's this place where the cliffside has a square indention in it, that really sticks out...put some shadow there or something....

all in all, pretty good...

Re: Nice
 

Thanks :) I know about the water thing, I'd already detailed 2 of the levels' water, but i couldnt be bothered detailing it all before posting so i just cleared the detail I'd already done :P

Ya, i think the squarish indent part is a bit plain, but i dont wanna put shadow in because then the shadows wouldnt be right, cuz the shadows are all at the back of the cliffs, not the front, too, but im not sure what to put in there..... maybe I'll just smooth out the cliff.


Thanks for your comments guys :)

I found two tile errors in the last screenshot

#1: that little green speck

#2, there is a tile to fix that (I see you have some there already) XD Lol, myself and some other people had an argument with some maloria staff on whether a tile error like that was acctually a tile error... We won in the end :D (Us-1 Them-0)

Tile errors? WHERE?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?! MUST KILL!!!!!
:megaeek:

what tile to fix and where's the little green speck?

xXShakakuXx: Pretty good levels! Nice job. Use all the sand tiles, and try to add a little more grass detail ( bushes, sand patches)

Overall nice work!

Thats not bad, the top cliff bit (Sand) is a bit plain though, it ahs to be said =)

I'm guessing my tileset was dumped. :megaeek:

Well, I like it but your detail isn't that shibby :) (shibby, lol). All in all you need to put shores and some tile errors to fix and you'll be ok... :)

oops forgot attachment

oh my good lord mommy... how picky can you be?