This old level need ur opinion
 

This is a level I did during the time I worked for Mystical Marlee (which is a dead server, rest in peace MM)
And I tought it was good, o yah, i noticed some tile errors but I wanted to keep it like it was when I "finished" it last year, even before, that was when I broke my shoulder so it's 1 year and a half ago, woah time goes fast!

Neways heres the level:

Where is the DETAIL?! Finish the level... Then post it :)

why is that waterfall sticking way the hell up there

o, theres another level above it where you see where the waterfall comes from.

Like the best part is the bomy statue I like that heh

He means at the bottom how the watefall tiles go up above the cliffs somehow, it's not right.

Me crap at snow levels=/
Actually me crap at level editing..

No sir, not editing... Making :(

Advice would be to add a few waves, rocks, grass for detail.
Remember, the waterfall starts at the EDGE of the cliff, not half way up or half way up the river :)

Where is the DETAIL @_@_@_@;;;;;

Add detail! *see attachment*

*Wonders how many times have i seen that?

once, twice? Three times max.

okay, I tought i shoudln't add gfx's bacause this is the Level making board and not the Gfx making one, but if you want that kind of thing, I will then, so I make those change
(actually I like those falls going from wherever , you can't really see the realief under the water so how can you say the waterfalls on this level aint suposed to do that?)
So like i was saying, I'll add ome gfxs.

well, it's not too bad, and i really like the jagged ice effect on the water...

Me took modified tileset and, neways ,look

Very nice, except the cliff tiles don't mesh right when they change direction. Also, the cliff is a little plain... =-\

Re: This old level need ur opinion
 

That level is severely lacking detail. I know very few sections, let alone whole areas, of rivers/creeks that are 100% straight. :X
Plus, there are a lot of tile errors in the water.


Also, in regards to the second version of that level, with the midified tileset; While midified tilesets can give spark to a level, with new looking trees and other things, it still doesn't work right if there is detail lacking.
Use some snow grass tiles in clumps, rather than spread out across the level, and if you really need to, use some predefined objects.

Hmmmmmm
tile errors on the water?
Well i guess people stopped doing that...
I don't think those are tile errors I really think it gives more of a style to the level and also think it looks good.

And I just wanted to show that tileset mroe than making the level better, lol

Thats defenitely more of a style

people got their own styles, some put grass tiles in clumps other don'T
I don'T

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Tile errers is water,and in cliff bit but some of the gfx are ok like mushrooms and stones=)

my only particular suggestions would be more detail and less straightness in the water edges...make em zig and zag more, it looks unnatural

Nice snow level. 6/10 !