Rate meh level please
 

Please rate my level. And give me some suggestions on what you think would make it even better. Also I havent even really decided what it is yet lol. So I could also use some suggestions on what you think it could be. This is my first time to build a level in a long time. So im a little rusty, but it's all coming back to me.

=)
 

Good i like ur style 9/10=)

omi
 

bleh too much detail , makes it look wierd

oh ya
 

4/10

less detail and otherwise ok...

Needs some work but thats real good for a first level attempt

Looks great 10/10.

And btw that's not his first level attempt. It's his " first time to build a level in a long time.", so he's a little rusty. He had a pretty nice house that he built himself on Dino Valley awhile back.

Looks awfully Birdbird_0. ;D
I think that style has weird perspective. It looks too flat, doesn't really work. It's something that makes me stare and think "what the hells going on"?

I said this was my first time to build a level in a long time. And this was the first time I ever attempted to use these tiles to make something like this. I just thought I would try something new instead of building an outside level like alot of other people do. And Birdbird_0 is a great level builder.

<3

I made a similar style about 3-4 weeks ago
http://forums.graal2001.com/forums/a...&postid=616733

I was never critisizing Bird's levels, he knows he owns my socks. And you have potential that I can see, my review wasn't neccesarily a bad one.

It's nice although I would change the floor.
I don't like the castle stair tops and kitchen ground together.
Looks kinda odd.

Yeah I noticed it looks funny. But thats temporary untill I can find something better with that kind of tile lol. I may even take it off the dock/water and put it on land or something. I still havent decided. And yeah it does kind of look flat. So perhaps I will make it stick out a lot more. Even though thats hard to do with these tiles im trying out. But hey you never know it's worth a try.

lol
 

hope this helps bird!

Re: lol
 

Hmm I dont understand what your saying lol

ahaha! Your wearing red bra and you have four boobs!

Good level. 7/10

Although the wood tiles don't give it much depth. It looks sorta flat in alot of the areas.

thnx
 

Yeah, im working on it right now. Im going to try to make it more 3dish and fix the tiling. Do yall think this place would look better on a different setting. Its not everyday u see a huge wooden mansion sitting on a floating dock in the ocean lol...

How about this?
 

I had no idea it would be this hard making this 3dish. But im working on it. What do yall think about this?

Ok
 

Ok I will try to fix that. Thanks for spotting that out.

liek, wood floor = ackm blends in, ack,
origional level 8.5/10, nice....
now 6.5/10, ack...

I think to give it a nicer look make the area surrounding the castle different. And take out the border of the level, those square wood shapes.

This level makes me understand why many servers get rejected.. they have levels like that 2/10 at the most this level made me sick when i looked at it thnx ima go take a tylenol now

hahaha
 

Omg what you said just made no sense. If this level makes you understand why many servers get rejected than you have no sense on levels. Or you just have worked on many servers that got rejected. lmao

You probably wont find a server with a level like this. You know why? Cuz if you would have read from earlier post I said I was trying something new. Instead of posting an outside wilderness level. I posted something different for once. Im just trying new things with different tiles. Did I ever say this level was going to be on a server thats being built no I guess I didnt. So before you come into a thread trying to raise your post count, why dont you actually read the rest of the post. That helps you know.

Ok
 

Yeah I thought the whole wooden castle on water thing was kind of wierd. But I need it there while i work on it. When I finish touching it up I think I will move it to a desolate place out in the woods, where a lot of people havent ventured. Thanks for waking me up. What was I thinking putting that on water lol.