Opinion on levels
 

Hey. These are some of the first two levels I've every really made, I just wanted to get some people's opinion's on 'em. =)

here's the other

Can you post screen shots please?

mmmmkay: AlexH, 2nd is a screen. I'd say it's dandy for your first few levels, even though the path tool was used. Also don't make the rocks, bushes etc. so random. Take a few out, clump some together etc.

It's okay.
A few suggestions though:
a) You shouldn't use tree NPC gfx, the trees can be linked with tiles.
b) You shouldn't use path generator, but if you do you should at least go back over it and edit so it doesn't look as if you've used it. Try taking out some of the rocks too.
c) Swamp. You should use the corner tiles for them. Looks a little square.
d) Grass could use a little more detailing, thats just personal opinion some people like that style.
e) Rocks and busy shouldn't be so randomly placed but if you do some should be removed.

I wonder if I should call that number on CallWave... :p

ok, thanks ya'll. =)

Here's the first image, I had the level and image sitting on my desktop so I got 'em confused.

lol, and go ahead and call that number if ya wanna talk to my ex-gf. lol.

I hate callwave.
-Wind

well, a point of advice, i dont suggest using path gen for a few reasons...first its good practice to actually use the tiles, second it looks better when you do it if you do it well, third its alot more fun. besides that theres not too much to the level but quite good for your first few levels. take mmmmkay's advice about the clumping, it usually comes out better.