hmm
 

ok this is my first inside level i made in a looooooooong time
mostly because i concentrate my level making on outside levels but i decided to try an inside level.
Please rate this and be harsh and tell me ways i can improve it because i want to get better at inside levels too.
thanx

I spy two tile errors in the wall [right side, same place, one on top of the other].

I think that that particular floor pattern is overused [not just the red 'chains,' but the little stair things too.] The stair things directly on top of each other looks bad, it looks better to make them diagonal by one tile [like you did with most of the rest]. It is a pretty plain level.

Not bad, Maybe floor could be more detailed...Hm...

6/10

Oh well Josh,first of all <3!.

Here is my rating:
I also spotted those tile errors,fix them.
Don't use predefinied(sp?) walls,they're wugly.
The chains are overused.
On the bar seats,there's one thing I never like
(Lifted up ones) to make it alot nicer use the
2 top tiles of the chair only don't use the bottom ones
it look's fugly use the top tiles and double them so they are the same size as normal.
Stair floors are also overused,if you make a floor with them it would look better if you used them as base tiles and added other tiles on them. :)
Other than that it's pretty nice.

5/10
Good potential,could use some work.

:D floors Shiney :):megaeek:

Same opinion