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Here (I'm a horrible lvl maker but I can learn for people who think it sucks the big one, I already know it does).

Here is the 2nd part.

ew....

This is what I made based off of the description, with a "water fix" by mmmkay.

Hmm here is the whole level x.x

2nd part.

Hmm...
Here is my final result :)

If you are to lazy to download level, here is the screenshot :D

Haha, DragonX, don't give up your day job. :p

I won't :(
I am just learning though..
Eventually I will be an average level maker!

that look all the same also made a finish vesion that u post but not 10 unfinished lvls...

Well... that is a nice start. You have somewhat attempts at the detail etc. Here are some suggestions though:

- Rivers must allwats flow in freaky non straight paterns! For now Just try to make it go in zig zags. (Same rule goes for roads etc)
- Some people don't agree with this, but I belive level should be FULL! By That I mean there should be Trees, Bushes wholes, grass, flowers, stones, stones2 and whatever the hell else you can think of, all over the level.

Fot now that's all you need to know, and now try to correct your level, then people will post more suggestions.

To others who laughed, he IS learning, instead of laughing help the guy out, when you started, you probably were way worse! I know I was... I just put 4 predefined houses, made a predefined path and though I was leet lvl maker.. Oh wait, at the time, it WAS being a l33t lvl maker X.x.

I remember years ago when i made my first levels.... everything i made was symetrical. It would piss me off if it wasn't, but it made natural levels look bad.

Once I overcame that my levels started becomming nice ^-^

Good Job DragonX... keep practicing :).

ok i am going to show you what i submited to the RPing Develp, i am ashamed i will go back and redo the walls and the lake, i was half asleep and i feel dumba nd i still have not gone to sleep, well see what i sent in then welp me with some suggjestions maybe, i am already atempting to fix the wall then try and re-send it in :D

ok i am going to show you what i submited to the RPing Develp, i am ashamed i will go back and redo the walls and the lake, i was half asleep and i feel dumba nd i still have not gone to sleep, well see what i sent in then welp me with some suggjestions maybe, i am already atempting to fix the wall then try and re-send it in :D

arrg the atachments are to big =/
if you guys care my AIM is Geno3344 :D