Lookie Plz!
 

ok, can u rate both these levels (i used Gori's tutorial for it a bit)

gah, my editor ate my other one,

here's the first one in gif, (forgot to put it in gif sry)

Ah... 6/10.

• Not that much detail on the grass; try to use more tiles.
• Some predefined objects are repeatedly, used such as the light stone.
• Try to add bushes in little bunches, they usually look better that way.
• The mixed trees are messed up, and I can spot a few tile errors.
• The house looks okay, as well as the water.
• Try to make the paths more... 'windier', I guess. They don't look as nice when they're straight and blocky.

Yeah, i'd say 6 too... I see you used Gori's first toutorial... I've noticed a few tile errors, for the water's coast, use the water>dirt tiles... the round ones, not the square ones... I see you use the path generator, thats fine, but only if you edit it after, I myself use that sometimes (im lazy ;P) But make sure you edit the path tile by tile after, to make it more interesting, and give the path a more jagged, less straight look...

mmmmkay: I rate it ___ because i'm too lazy to open files, screenshot please. ;D

He gave on screenshot ;O

mmmmkay: Haha that's weird, somehow I missed his 2nd post.

OOOOo! You so crazeh!

um, i didnt use the path generator, dont like it :p

Gori DOES exist?!

4/10

Overuse of Rocks, Muchrooms, and other pre-defined objects. Bad object placement.

Try taking out everything but the warter, house, and bottem part of the path, and build from there. (The watter, and house look good btw.) I did a QUICK example of what to do, there are many tiling errors, this was a 30second thing.

Keep at it, you'll get beter with time.

Urizen :D

Oh... Right you are, im sorry ;P

Well as many people said to many predefined objects and tiles I give it a 5/10

Yes, just keep at it it's a good start. And, OMG, for once no-one gave out some kind of harsh comment about it sucking and being not worth our time or something demoralising like that. I congratulate you people...:)

I am not sure x.x!

*stuffs Gori in box* No, he doesn't whatever you heard was a lie!... *strangles*

Stoved me in a box, on my birthday and all... :grrr:

Ah well... guess I am stuck O.o!

Anyone here is a locksmith?! :)

Oh! But it's a luxuray(sp) box! With a hot tub and everything!

Oh my... I think I stay O.o!

And this is getting off topic :P

7/10 :)

*Throws in a laptop loaded up with graal* There... on topic again.

Nice :cool:

Good level anyway :)