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My first level I tried on...
-=Josey=-
Ok, I know this isn't the best level you've ever seen. All I was going for is to make it not the worse you've ever seen. I tried mixing a few styles I got from the forum and a few from some friends. Tell me what you think. Praise it or criticise it, both will make me better. ;] |
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Eck, forgot to attach it. ;X |
semi good, I dislike the doors, the don't fit at all, try doorenigmaup.png or something, the give it the cabin look.And the lamp images are missing which take away the effect of a very good level.
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more texture please!
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-=Josey=-
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She is not a she, she is a he. The correct spelling for female is "Josie", and the male is "Josey". I don't have time to really do anything anymore, work sucks. Oh well. Later. |
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Well it isnt the worst I have EVER seen but it almost is. First off the buildings throw the whole seen of whack, use something more outdoorsey. Also you made a path and copied and pasted the same block over and over again, try being origional. Show the lamps. To much grass in once concentrated area, spread it out and add some flowers. The swamp grass looks horrible. The trees need to be more plentiful and not in a diagonal row. Add some water also.
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Heres what I feel the level should look like in .png
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And heres the level itself....
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I also didn't like what you did to the path. It looks pretty plain now. |
It looks to copy and pasted take the time to be original and more times then others it will make the level better
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