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Waltz5

11-27-2001 09:19 AM

Take a Look

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Take a look at these levels and tell me what you think.. I've tryed before but that was just fooling around. So this is like my first "real" level. Tell me what you think and what I can do to improve on the future levels that I try.

Waltz5

11-27-2001 09:20 AM

One More....

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Here's another... be critical on what you say. I hope one day to work on a server.

Poogle

11-27-2001 09:26 AM

1st one: great
2nd one: dumb

Waltz5

11-27-2001 09:27 AM

Please

Please make more comments than that so I know what I need to improve on.

aires_graal

11-27-2001 09:41 AM

2nd one

the 2nd one is weird, why is there a waterfall coming out of those trees?

Waltz5

11-27-2001 09:49 AM

Lol

Don't know.. I guess that is pretty weird. Buy now I know better. Thanks. So 1st one is good?

Qwert616

11-27-2001 11:16 AM

1st,
Looks pretty good. For some reason I dislike so many lilly pad things making the trail in the water.

2nd
The blue house in the bottom has a few errors. I think it is something to do with the seperation of the 1st and 2nd floor. It was already mentioned but the water falls are coming from the trees. You need to make some type of water basin to hold it. Or just a spot for it to come out of.

Faheria_LAT1

11-27-2001 11:39 AM

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ok, here goes for Silver's 1337 rectangles of obviousness:

1st lvl = VERY nice
2nd lvl = minor tile errors + check the screenshot =P

nyghtGT

11-27-2001 02:18 PM

Re: One More....

Quote:

Originally posted by Waltz5
Here's another... be critical on what you say. I hope one day to work on a server.

if you are iterested and can show me some more work i could possibly hire you as a LAT for Andor, allthough i would need to see some really good inside levels as well ...

vovavziggy

11-28-2001 12:48 AM

Re: Take a Look

Quote:

Originally posted by Waltz5
Take a look at these levels and tell me what you think.. I've tryed before but that was just fooling around. So this is like my first "real" level. Tell me what you think and what I can do to improve on the future levels that I try.

Niiiiice bridge....uh-oh...that doesn't sound right :(

Poogle

11-28-2001 03:08 AM

Re: Lol

Quote:

Originally posted by Waltz5
Don't know.. I guess that is pretty weird. Buy now I know better. Thanks. So 1st one is good?

1st one is great but the 2nd one the waterfall from tree is odd take off the waterfall and it would be great

TDO2000

11-28-2001 05:38 AM

There are some small tile-errors at the ways and they should have more curves, if they are lines like this it doesn't look that good...

Spark910

11-29-2001 02:44 AM

Paths could be alot more bendy a little too straight.

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