What do you think?
 

What do you think of this level?
Im not done yet, I will post a screenshot of my level when it is done.

why did you make the thread now then?

it didn't post
sorry
here it is

I dont know
I guess I did it so I could fix any tile errors, or add anything before I move on and finish it up

its way to plain
detail it a lot more
theres lots of grass tiles, use them.

I know its plain
all I tried to finish was the trees and the house
I might add a pathway, and I will add grass tiles
do you see a lot of things wrong with the trees?

at the top right of the ss make the trees conect

I dont know how to make the trees connect
can you help me?

Heres What you need.. i made little arrows to show u
But there are too many since the level is so FORKING PLAIN here =)

file too big sorry..

hello?
I told you I would add more detail later
someone please just help me connect the trees in the top right hand corner

House error but dont worry all servers have that now cuse the maker forgot thast they need to line up what a dumb mistake!!

go into a graphics program and chnage the colours to 256 then it will be small enough :)

Im almost done with the path
I'll show u a screenshot in a sec

here it is
I might add some more grass later

your mother gave birth to you. what a dumb mistake!!!|

sorry, i am a bit mad. ;(

ok...

there
just about done
what do you'll think of this level?
I just need to connect the trees at the top right corner, and dont say the bricks on the tall house don't look right, cuz they dont look right for anyone right now
thanks

Basically, more detail. And work at the brick on the house.

how boozy?
I cant fix the house tiles
and I already put enough grass

Just use other tiles than the two you were using. And maybe this might make it look better, don't use it all in groups with a bunch of grass and one flower.

hmm
I tried spreading out the grass tiles, but that looked strange
it looks better when they are clustered out
fine, I will use more flowers

there
for the pathway, I didnt just use the regular tiles, I tried to combine both types of those pathway tiles

It may be just me, but it looks like the bricks for the house are a little messed up, and im not talking about the new pics1.png. It doesn't look aligned, but that maybe just me.

its hard to make the brick tiles match
the old ones matched perfectly, but the new ones just dont

Then use the old tileset like me :p

ok
I used more grass tiles
tell me what you think of this level now

Nice level i suppose.
1 problem except the trees - the tall house the shadow is too long a tower's shadow doesnt stretch along the tower look at the tower and imagine how the shadow would stop to show depth. Usually its around half-way to 3/4's the way up

hmm
thank you very much
what is wrong with the trees?

Its plain, it has no nice enviornment effects, just looks like dirt path with some weeds growing outside, it doesn't have any atmostphere or theam

Sucks we all cant make those leet moving and jumping lights like you =P

The only thing that is HORRIBLE in that level is the statue things with the blocks on top of them.... get rid of them and maybe expand the house to fill the empty space.

too bad we can't use lights on free servers, bah!!

I could use light effects if I wanted
is there anything wrong with the path?

Rofl
 

Listen, Man. You need more tiles to that. as Bird said, It doesn't have any atmosphere..o.O I'm not very good at making Outside leels.. But this is my probably one of my best..For my server, Enchantment Graal. =-) Lol..I'm working on an inside one.. Maybe I'll pull a snap shot out of my ass in a minute.

::Pulling something out of his ass::
 

Arg..=-D

Re: ::Pulling something out of his ass::
 

I finally found out...you work on Eternal Destiny but the reson you havent been online is because you have another identity!!

Nope..
 

Actually, There's a good reason. o.O Lol. You won't believe me though, and I don't perticulary wish to explain. I can't get on AIM any more. ;-) AOL problems.. Lol. Believe it or not, I still work on the god damn levels. When I'm bored.. I have mad detial in that ****.

Re: Rofl
 

that is horrible.

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