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zerxusgraal 04-29-2012 02:47 AM

A few of my levels :)
 
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Here we go..
A while ago I got the urge to work with a more classic style, so I took a pics1.png edited it a little bit and started doing some levels.
Here's a few.. IF I get this to work.. haha :D

Tell me what you think, if you feel there is anything that would improve them please tell me :)
keep in mind I am going for a more "classic" look, but not blank and full of errors like it was back in the days ;)

Oh and also, not all the levels are complete...
there we go, now for the levels.. :)

Tricxta 04-29-2012 03:02 AM

I love some of the shapes you present in your levels and that desert path. Although you could definately improve them. Those trees in the first level don't really work imo... also in your last level the waterfalls would look better if they weren't perfectly inline but rather not so perfect. Also in the forest level, the puddles are poorly represented and would be better seperate to the grass lines.

Overall, well done. Can't wait to see some later work after you've perfected your style.

maximus_asinus 04-29-2012 03:47 AM

I really like what you presented, it reminds me of my old work as we share similar styles. I think you*have a lot of potential, keep at it.*

Ducati_Link 04-29-2012 04:48 AM

I think I would have to disagree with Tricxta, sorry, with a few things.

I think the trees in the first level work quite well. Its like a eery forest, with gloomy darkness.. and think it works well.

Water falls I could agree on, It would probably look a tad better putting them just off from each other.

Though the puddles with the grass I think work perfectly.. as personally I look at that as water seeping through the grass and running out to the dirt area. I think if you made it separate, it would look over detailed.


Awesome job, Zerxus! Love the style, and how you work it.

Crono 04-29-2012 11:15 AM

i like the first, third, and fourth. good job. some minor errors in the cliffing but fixing them would completely change the cliffs.

edit-just noticed, wtf is up with sweden and LATs? :p

Ducati_Link 04-29-2012 11:24 AM

Sweden and Graal! You guys are everywhere!

Luda 04-29-2012 12:10 PM

I really like that first level

Emera 04-29-2012 12:58 PM

What an amazing job!

Sp_lit 04-29-2012 02:40 PM

I love the first level :)

zerxusgraal 04-29-2012 06:47 PM

Thanks a lot guys :)
as for the waterfalls i agree.
I made the cliffs first and then i wanted the waterfall there, i was to lazy to redo the cliffs.
is there any error in the cliffs that is not caused by the waterfall?
I used to do what i have seen people call wan cliffs. (Horrible).. so if there's anything point it out please :)
for the puddles in the sand i prefer to do it like this.
But as we say in Sweden "smaken är som baken, delad"

WanDaMan 05-02-2012 10:28 AM

Some very beautiful and creative work, keep it up ;)

+rep

Geno 05-02-2012 07:58 PM

looking good!

Darlene159 05-03-2012 03:59 AM

Always have loved your levels. :)

ff7chocoboknight 05-03-2012 04:11 AM

Those levels are very impressive, and it takes a lot to impress me.


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