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These are a few months old and I haven't really started on anything new yet so I guess I'll post these and try to improve them a bit more
So any suggestions? Fixed the soda bottle |
well the gun isn't a few months old but the other stuff is
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The coke bottle looks like it's full of fecal matter.
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Should make a bigger coca-cola, I'm thirsty.
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Now try some constructive criticism It's a bit more helpful |
Tbh, I find the bottle GFX a little strange with their shadings, I believe it'd be nice if it actually had some form of background to back it up.
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I love the look of the Coke bottle. If you look at Coca-Cola, it's more of a blackish color. Great job (:
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I like you're work, but it could benefit from a few minor changes.
1) The cork in the first image appears jammed inside the container. It should be poking out of the top a little bit. 2) I agree that the color of the soda might be a little too light. It looks like a thicker liquid..like chocolate milk. Also, the cap on the bottle looks obnoxiously large. 3) The top/down view of the gun just doesn't look like a gun. It looks a little too short in length; at first glance they look like over-sized bullet. You definitely have some good quality work here, nice job. |
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The cork on the potion I already knew looked jammed lol I'll fix it and post it :3 |
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Here's a grass tile I just made
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