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Snake980 06-12-2011 10:21 PM

Graphics (Suggestions?)
 
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These are a few months old and I haven't really started on anything new yet so I guess I'll post these and try to improve them a bit more

So any suggestions?

Fixed the soda bottle

Snake980 06-12-2011 10:23 PM

well the gun isn't a few months old but the other stuff is

fowlplay4 06-12-2011 10:45 PM

The coke bottle looks like it's full of fecal matter.

Fulg0reSama 06-12-2011 10:49 PM

Should make a bigger coca-cola, I'm thirsty.

Snake980 06-12-2011 11:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by fowlplay4 (Post 1654516)
The coke bottle looks like it's full of fecal matter.

Ok
Now try some constructive criticism It's a bit more helpful

Fulg0reSama 06-12-2011 11:53 PM

Tbh, I find the bottle GFX a little strange with their shadings, I believe it'd be nice if it actually had some form of background to back it up.

patrickp2p 06-13-2011 12:35 AM

I love the look of the Coke bottle. If you look at Coca-Cola, it's more of a blackish color. Great job (:

Adidas 06-13-2011 01:23 AM

I like you're work, but it could benefit from a few minor changes.

1) The cork in the first image appears jammed inside the container. It should be poking out of the top a little bit.

2) I agree that the color of the soda might be a little too light. It looks like a thicker liquid..like chocolate milk. Also, the cap on the bottle looks obnoxiously large.

3) The top/down view of the gun just doesn't look like a gun. It looks a little too short in length; at first glance they look like over-sized bullet.

You definitely have some good quality work here, nice job.

Snake980 06-13-2011 02:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Adidas (Post 1654544)
I like you're work, but it could benefit from a few minor changes.

1) The cork in the first image appears jammed inside the container. It should be poking out of the top a little bit.

2) I agree that the color of the soda might be a little too light. It looks like a thicker liquid..like chocolate milk. Also, the cap on the bottle looks obnoxiously large.

3) The top/down view of the gun just doesn't look like a gun. It looks a little too short in length; at first glance they look like over-sized bullet.

You definitely have some good quality work here, nice job.

Thanks so much ^^ and as for the cap on the coke, yeah it looks large but plastic soda bottle caps are kinda large (right?)

The cork on the potion I already knew looked jammed lol I'll fix it and post it :3

Snake980 06-13-2011 11:56 PM

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Here's a grass tile I just made


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