Another new level i made yesturday
 

ok i orginally made it to be a player business when deophite was manager but never happen. So Alf wants it as a npc run server so i kind of made it like speedy pizza but it display tricks and stuff while making it. Also i haven't really heard from Alf so I have no clue if was made
the food was made my Motive aka Sean but the plants,shades.ect was made by me im not the best of gfxer but i try

This one is for Light effect display
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h2...98/npcshop.png


one with out light effects
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h2...8/graal-26.png

it looks like speedy pizza except asian

na sp is bigger and they have different ovens plus they dnt have ganis displaying like i want to do eggroll shack

It looks like an asian restaurant where the customers are forced to eat their food inside of closets.

You can't use wall tiles for a counter, the perspective looks bad. Especially when it is directly connected to the rest of the walls.

I love it. Not one part of the level is bare, or looking blank. Now, I'm no Level developer, but i would be more than happy to play this level. :D

The concept is there... but the perspective is non-existant and the design is lacking somewhat. It's like any default shop.

The custom images let you know someone spent time on the level, and add a nice touch.

I personally dislike the whole 'outlining the level in a different shade' thing. I prefer some nice floor designs. It's not just you; any level with an outline like that turns me off. (there are some exceptions)

You all have a ur thoughts about it. The wall is not a table
and the perspective i wasn't trying for perspective i was just messing around with it tech, I wasn't trying for realstic either. Ya its a npc ran shop it really wouldn't be like every era shops. Let me ask you this Do u do tricks with your food at speedy pizza or do u do tricks with guns? if no then its not like every npc shop on era
i made it to be similar to speedy pizza u can stock and get money

Considering you're making an asian styled level try thinking of asian design features; symetry, plantlife?, small shrine.

You could make the level way smaller, the outer walls.. why do we see them inside?, you could use more of the wooden floor and let the "red carpet" function in the pathways (then you dont have to do unnecessary floor detailing, more table area.

Good luck

The perspective makes it look quite weird

Try making the enterance better; putting a Roof over the door. Other then that, great job.

If the wall is not a table, then there are pictures of table set-ups on the walls of your closets..