I really need help
 

I cant manage to get the up sprite and down sprite right. I have no idea what it should look like
Here are some things i have made to improve my skill
http://i55.tinypic.com/35aj3ox.png
I dont feel comfy with these but i still made them so...
http://i54.tinypic.com/idsryu.png

I'm sorry, but judging from the other ones, I really don't think you made that first one.

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I agree with Aeko here. The 3 other guns have little to no detail on them, there is no black outline, the texture is poor (green on the whole gun for the first one, pillow shading for the two others?) and the lightsource was simply not applied like on the first gun, which you didn't make.

One more thing... why would you bother showing your "other work" when you're only requesting help for the first image? And why show the first gun you need help with zoomed in and the others at real size?

Every time someone shows off their latest gun it is always exactly the same, they only ever show the side view sprites, anyone can get a reference image and make some line art based on that then just fill shade it with a couple of colours. They never do the other views because that's actually difficult getting the perspective bang on and I've seen enough pillow shading to last a life time.

I'll agree with the other 3 that who ever made the 1st gun didn't make the other 3. Also judging from your OTHER thread it looks like all the guns you've made massively deviate in style from the others you've made.