Sewer House Level I made :O
 

Tell Chain what you like and Dislike! :/

cool my drawing is ur signature but you made it jpg :D

Looks bland, too much open space. I really don't like the gun in the wall either. Otherwise its not soo bad.

Yea luda lol, I saw it on a mass on un xD I had to put it as my signature! :D

I have to agree it's pretty plain and boring.

Well, What can I do to make it more smexc?

You need to find better tiles for the walls, and the book shelves aren't right.
This level seems to be irrational all together, but keep practicing.. you'll get the hang of it. Custom tilesets are tricky to learn.

Too square
Too open
Too bland
Fail execution of imagery
Looks like Rachel made it (I'm still on bad things)
1000 zigzags != decorative floor pattern
Copy paste of main sitting tables != helping it look good

I do have one compliment, you took time to put all the wall segments, not just dragged them so it looks like a crappy random wall thats about to fall down (everyone does that `-`)

If you spend that much time on everything, and lay it out part by part (I usually do a outline, then do the main floor, then the patterns, then the tables, and images last) in some sort of non-stupid order that causes ugly tile errors I'm sure the next one will be better!

Make the whole thing smaller :P. and perhaps try a different pattern on the floor to make it look more interesting, other things could do the trick tho =P

Fixed..!

Whoa, I had something Higlighted when I screenied. Ignore that :D

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you did nothing but fix the bookshelves?

If this is supposed to be a sewer level, why not try and make it look like a sewer? Add puddles, cob webs, grime and dirt. Stuff you'd find in a sewer!

I'm using Era Tiles, and images. There is no bubbles or stuff bro.

Too bland and boring, too symetrical with the book cases etc, change the tiles on the floor looks horrible and make the level more interesting instead of boring.