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MrName 03-23-2010 11:18 PM

Chemical Gun
 
I was bored :)

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/3...esomething.png

I hope you like it

Jcs1919 03-23-2010 11:42 PM

are you serious

papajchris 03-24-2010 12:55 AM

nice

alexrox222 03-24-2010 04:16 AM

Your shading needs to be a bit cleaner, with a greater variety of colours. I don't like the outline or the shape either, but the
concept is cool. Try making the little green things more interesting. Also, Zone is kinda a dark, shiny coloured game. Keep that
in mind next time you try :]. Oh, and watch the porportions, and think about your character holding it. Is it a rifle? If so, where
do you put your hand? How does it shoot with no trigger? What does it shoot? Can it be Dual Wielded?

Craigus 03-24-2010 01:59 PM

I love it

Liberated 03-24-2010 05:41 PM

Could be better, it doesn't seem to really have a light source.

alexrox222 03-25-2010 02:48 AM

You know buddy, I could fix that gun up and show you what I mean if you'd be so kind as to give me an A'OK :]

Switch 03-25-2010 04:18 AM

Gradient isn't shading.

MagikMasterMind 03-26-2010 03:46 AM

It could be better

-the outline is pretty basic
-the shading is somewhat akward, you should be working with a lightsource when pixeling

I highly recommand
- a new outline where you can see the different parts of the gun
- a light source comming from the top, like all other zone weapons
- no pillow shadowing unless you plan on giving the gun a certain shape.

kadaj15 04-04-2010 10:52 PM

ewww this is sooo plain no one would use this garbage

darksage15 05-15-2010 10:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kadaj15 (Post 1567084)
ewww this is sooo plain no one would use this garbage

Go make more threads about how you're the best.


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