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Chemical Gun
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are you serious
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nice
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Your shading needs to be a bit cleaner, with a greater variety of colours. I don't like the outline or the shape either, but the
concept is cool. Try making the little green things more interesting. Also, Zone is kinda a dark, shiny coloured game. Keep that in mind next time you try :]. Oh, and watch the porportions, and think about your character holding it. Is it a rifle? If so, where do you put your hand? How does it shoot with no trigger? What does it shoot? Can it be Dual Wielded? |
I love it
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Could be better, it doesn't seem to really have a light source.
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You know buddy, I could fix that gun up and show you what I mean if you'd be so kind as to give me an A'OK :]
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Gradient isn't shading.
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It could be better
-the outline is pretty basic -the shading is somewhat akward, you should be working with a lightsource when pixeling I highly recommand - a new outline where you can see the different parts of the gun - a light source comming from the top, like all other zone weapons - no pillow shadowing unless you plan on giving the gun a certain shape. |
ewww this is sooo plain no one would use this garbage
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