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OiRodgar 11-26-2009 08:36 PM

My level
 
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What do you think? What could I change?

EDIT: Okay, wait. Somehow I can't do screenshots xD
EDIT2: It should work now.

Door 11-26-2009 08:40 PM

Add more depth to the snow palace, it looks good but needs a bit more contrast considering the severity of the blizzard

Eagle 11-27-2009 09:28 AM

Kind of simple, I like it though.

Spark910 11-27-2009 08:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Door (Post 1540624)
Add more depth to the snow palace, it looks good but needs a bit more contrast considering the severity of the blizzard

Snow :confused:

Imperialistic 11-29-2009 08:46 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Spark910 (Post 1540833)
Snow :confused:

I second the question! x_x

Samposse 11-29-2009 12:23 PM

im giving u 4/10

Door 11-29-2009 05:43 PM

okay now that there is actually a screencap there and not a blank white image file (I THOUGHT HE WAS JOKING), I will give a real critique!

I'm not sure I like your poles in the middle of the room. What is their purpose? I have the same feeling about those little squares you seem to have around the corners. Maybe if you provide for us a purpose for this level, these little bits of kibble would make perfect sense, but as just a person looking at a random level, I can't say I appreciate them myself.

Darlene159 11-29-2009 05:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Door (Post 1541157)
I'm not sure I like your poles in the middle of the room. What is their purpose?

Same here. They seem to just be......there.

maximus_asinus 11-29-2009 05:49 PM

I assume they're support columns for the ceiling but they're so sporadic it looks wrong.

Codein 11-29-2009 05:56 PM

I don't like it much at all. Everything seems so random.

Why is the carpet's edge so random?

Why are there random sized support beams in random locations?

Why are there random rugs about?

When furnishing a room, things are rarely placed at random and are carefully placed in order. Sure, people will say it looks boring but why? Shouldn't people be aiming for some kind of realism to entice even a small amount of emmersion?

Jcs1919 12-01-2009 01:20 PM

6/10 for me

Imperialistic 12-01-2009 07:03 PM

2/10 if you want to consider the horrible perspective.
3/10 if you don't want to consider the horrible perspective.

OiRodgar 12-01-2009 11:30 PM

thanks for the critique. I will see what I can do better next time. :D

Dnegel 12-01-2009 11:59 PM

Good luck. :)

Samposse 12-03-2009 11:03 AM

to make the level beter so shoud you add some npc's/images in the middle
like an chouge or something


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