Rate my level.
 

Ok, this is my first to attempt to actually make a good level. Please tell me what you think.

And tell me things that could improve it.

Thanks

The trees at the top are in a straight line. Make them more "jagged". I've always preferred the other pathway/dirt tiles also. It may take a bit longer to use them, but it looks nicer.

*bump*

It looks pretty good. Just add some more grass tiles.

Pathway looks to plain. It's only one tile.

yea there are SO many tiles you can use for grass, dirt just use them all un evenly and it begins to look really nice

Not bad for a first level.
There needs to be more detail in the grass and dirt.
Once you add more detailit should be better.
Just remember, Practice makes perfect, but obsession makes better.

I'm more of a person who scripts NPCs.

i hardly ever make levels.

Thats a good house
 

I like it!:)

Needs more detail.. go crazy witht he bushs and weeds.. just randomly place them around..
also it needs little red trees and little green trees No level is complete without them :D

Dont listen to Kranky, hes one of those mad tilers who winds up making another Xone =/

The level is nice but Adren is right, jagged the trees more and play with adding cliffs, small trees, more grass, and not flowers (in my opinion flowers are ugly as hell)

The level is really good for your first level

I suggest going to Faheria and looking at the levels tiled on the coast to see how you should do grass

In the paths, don't use that one dirt tile so often, use the other dirt tiles in there too.

i doubt the surroundings would be that badly damaged, you've added too much brown, sorta looks ugly :(

Grass to plain....
Trees to borring....
No shadows.....

Helmut Shut Your Face