Second GFX- Crystal Launcher/Rifle
 

Yeah well here's my second work (Well, I made alot of failures...), the Crystal Launcher/Rfile. I'm not sure for the last part tough... Basicaly, I tought it could be a weak rifle with a decent speed but it could have a chance to freeze.

Its a good weapon, only, can you use another background? Than we can see it better ;)

Stop putting two ,, to represent a period. Also, its weapon, not wapon.

Also, I like the shading, seems interesting. The outline is sorta iffy.

zeur niet jasper :)

Wtf doe ik? Ik zeg dat je het alleen niet goed kan zien met die achtergrond, wat is daar zeuren aan?:mad: (Dutch)

You didnt understand me

meer nederlanders!~!
didn't know that lol.
gun seems a bit small,

The trigger needs to be a little thicker but otherwise I think it looks good. =]

Well if you're like me, you will be agreeing that white seems to scrap it up a little, I changed the trigger too. As for iffy, what does it means?

I think the trigger needs to be bigger.

For some reason this KINDA reminds me of the erbeamer but this one looks cooler then the erbeamer. =]

Same...

the weapon needs more verticle shading and less lateral shading try using highlights.

nice.

Well, I do admit it is looking like the ER-Beamer, but it was unintentional. On the left side, it's the version non-ER-Beamer, which I kinda hate more than the similar version. While not bad, it's too blue and thick. I also upgarded the trigger's size. (Not sure but, is it the thing you have to press to fire?)
Sorry for the green background, it just makes the shading pop more than in white.

I'm sorry to tell you that I don't like it... I think it needs more details, and I think there is way too much purple. I think you have to work on it man. :)
Nice shadin skills, tough.